View Full Version : Redemption II: The Gate Chronicles

03-16-2005, 11:08 AM
Well, because of the board moving, a fight i started a while ago based on mmorpg type elements died before it got off the ground called "Redemption: Innocence Lost" (here's a link to the old title page: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v645/animecrzi/Redemption.jpg). Nyway, i want to restart it. So....here goes (prepare for reading):

Background: We will be set in a world called Asraeth. Asraeth is much like Earth in that it has an abundance of water and large landmasses like our continents, beautiful land scapes, cities, etc. However, the lifestyle of its inhabitants is very different. There is a mix between technology and traditional methods of labor, weapons, buildings, etc. The world has a fabric of magic that permeates the air and certain people who devote their lives to the fabric can manipulate it. Unlike Earth, there are different species of sentient beings. Humes (borrowed from ffxi...), Elves, Felars, and Kaelans. Humes are basically your standard human, very versatile, able to do any type of job, etc, etc. Elves are lithe and graceful. They live a much longer than a typical hume (up to 400ish years) and are a bit frailer than a normal hume, but usually are generally faster and quite intelligent (you know the rest probably). Felars are a catlike race. While not as intelligent as an elf or hume, they are very fast and agile and have incredible reflexes. Until they entered into an alliance with the humes, they were very primitive and have only been introduced to technology for 50 or so of our years. Kaelans are a half demonic race--sons or daughters of secret affairs between demons, who live in remote areas far from civilization, and humes. Lesser demons must be dealt with by travelers and adventurers seeking fame and fortune and can come in all shapes and sizes. They, however, are not sentient. Greater demons, who sometimes control lesser demons and use them to do their bidding can also come in a variety of shapes and sizes, although most are humanoid. Greater demons are intelligent and have a variety of superhuman abilities. However, the term 'demon' is somewhat misleading, since not all are 'evil' by hume standards. The last race in the League (secretly), they are around 8 feet tall and some select individuals have wings and a limited ability to fly (more like gliding). They are very intelligent, very fast, and incredibly strong. Their numbers are extremely small and htey also have the ability to transform into a human form to pass secretly as humans so they are not eradicated out of fear.

The Hume Wars took place in 3052 and lasted for 3 years. The war was a massive civil war which eventually involved some of the other races. Two parties, The Revolution and the Front were the two main parties and the Revolution eventually won, mainly because of the help of a certain assassinÖ Now, another war is fast approaching. Something from the bowels of the Earth has been awakened in The Revolutionís greed. And itís not from this world.

Plot: Kalithe was a little boy of 6 when his parents were killed right in front of his eyes by a certain organization. Born in 3037 (that means he was 15 during the Hume wars folks, do the math..), he was raised on a small farm on a remote island by his parents. The organization wanted to capture Kalithe because of a certain ability in Kalitheís blood. They tricked him into believing that The Front killed his parents and Kalithe was raised in The Revolutionís academy and graduated with the highest scores, both physical and mental in the academy. His only rival was the son of the leader of the organization and he treated Kalithe like his own son. When The Revolution destroyed The Front during the Hume Wars, it was mainly because of Kalithe and Seran, the leaderís son. Seran led The Revolutionís armies with brilliant tactics and Kalithe was an assassin in the shadows and killed many of The Frontís best leaders and generals. However, during the wars he discovered how corrupt the organization was and left to become a mercenary for hire. However, the damage was already done and the war ended soon after with The Revolution on top and in control. The Revolution continues to search for him because he knows many secret things that could potentially ruin them. However, after the war and the cruelty he saw, Kalithe no longer cared about the government and such matters. He just wandered around working as a mercenary for a living. However, during his time at The Revolution, he heard about a top-secret project that would be put into action once they had secured control. The ultimate objective: total control of all the other races and the world. He wasnít sure of the details, but they were going to awaken some ancient power that had been sealed away by powerful elvan mages and try to harness it. Now, there is another movement stirring because of the cruelty and utter disregard of The Revolution, now called The Republic of Hieres (the land where the Humes live). This movement called ďNeoĒ knows a little of The Revolutionís plan because of spies and also knows that Kalithe is the only one who has ever escaped from The Revolution and lived for any length of time afterwards. Comprised of 1000 or so beings of all races (because the original Hume members notified the other, less powerful races [in terms of numbers and military strength] about The Revolutionís plan), Neo wants to start another civil war to overthrow The Revolution, but need someone who can stop The Revolutionís plan so that they can achieve their long term goal. That person is Kalithe.

Whatís to Come: Kalithe will meet a girl who is part of Neo who eventually persuades him to join them. He is initially very hesitant because he no longer wishes to kill and wants to avoid bloodshed. After he escaped the Revolution, he had decided to never kill again and wanted to avoid the world and all its misery. However she is able to persuade him otherwise and he joins Neo eventually. They have to find the 9 gates that open the key to this ancient power and destroy them before The Revolution finds them. Seran, Kalitheís brother (basically), now leads The Revolution. The reason that they must stop The Revolution is because in their greed and thirst for power, they neglected to do enough research and donít realize that this power will destroy Asraeth if unleashed. Kalithe, while searching for the gates will encounter an old hermit who turns out to be his grandfather, who will teach him the secret to his powerful wind magic capabilities that is in his blood. However, his grandfather dies while attempting to buy them some time to escape from an army of Revolutionaries trying to kill Kalithe and the Neo leaders. The leader of that army was Seran. Kalithe will now want revenge (he finds out at some point that The Revolution also killed his parents) and the climactic scene at the very end will be a battle between the two. From there, if we decide to have another character, like fast forward so that Kalithe has a kid and so did Seran, we can continue except that Seranís kid succeeds and Kalitheís kid has to stop the ancient power unleashed on Asraeth.

Your Job: Design the characters and draw pages, the details of the plot, etc, etc.

Choices for characters:

-Girl Kalithe meets (name too)

-Members of Neo (the core group of leaders)

-Average grunt(soldier) of Neo

-Average grunt of The Reublic of Hieres

-Special assassins or soldiers from both organizations

-Kalitheís grandfather

-Kalitheís parents

-Gate concepts

-Overall landscape concepts (Iíll probably do some of the landscape/setting related stuff too)

-Vehicle concepts

-Weapon concepts

-Scientists concepts for both organizations

-Capital city of each race concepts

-Kaelan concepts (I have the other races)

-Anything else you can think of

Rules and Regulations:

1)Reply at least every 4 days

2)Each turn is 2 weeks long, meaning you have 2 weeks max to finish your pages

3)Do 2-4 pages each turn

4)No flaming or whatnot, etc, etc.

5)I realize this is a little arrogant or whatever, but please have an at least decent skill level. Meaning, you should at least be able to ink, draw different angles of the head and body, can at least sort of do landscapes, etc. Donít join if you donít have much experience drawing, etc, etc.

6)I want this to be good, meaning high quality. So clean your stuff up, ink it if you can. Donít post like sketches as the final pages (although posting sketches and roughs are encouraged as a sort of progress report).

7)Feel free to offer suggestion about changes in the plot, background, etc, etc.

8)Just donít be stupid.

Initial concept of Kalithe (costume and hair might be altered slightly):


Here's a bio:
Name: Kalithe Braam
Sex: Male
Age: 19
Height: 5'10''
Weight: 180 lbs
Hair Color: grey
Eye color: maroon
Affiliation: Past-The Revolution, Present-none, Future-Neo
Weapon(s): Sword named "Redemption" and custom pistol
Special Abilities: Faster and stronger than normal humes and has powerful wind magic potential (can cast a little as of now)
Background and Story: See above

03-16-2005, 08:10 PM
Another character, Seran, the "antagonist" i guess.


03-17-2005, 06:17 PM
A female elf concept:

no one wants to join?

03-20-2005, 04:30 PM
well...ok. Then if no one wants to join, mod's can you please move this to the comics/sequentials forum? If ppl r still interested in helping me, then we can start a fresh thread in the challenges section..

03-21-2005, 09:19 AM
Actually, this sounds pretty interesting. You can count me in, not sure if you want to run it as a fight club, but I will help in illustrating a story like this with you.

03-21-2005, 12:06 PM
yay a reply! well, i wanted to do it as a fight club, but we need more concepts first. If you could help me make the concepts listed on the first post, that would be great. As you can see, i only have 3 so far..

03-21-2005, 01:28 PM
well hell im in ...i understand about the skill level thing to ****glad you said it**** i can do and special assassin and other thing

03-21-2005, 03:20 PM
sweet, lets get this thing rolling. Male elf and Felar concepts coming soon.

03-24-2005, 07:57 AM
more of the main char, Kalithe:

03-25-2005, 11:10 AM
OOH OOH OOH i like i like im soooo in... i call the leader of the neo group.... is cocky and arrogant okay for character style..... *SQUEE* anyways.... yeah im in.... *duel thumbs up*

03-25-2005, 11:19 AM
oops... i mean member of Neo.... my bad

03-25-2005, 03:27 PM
yeah cool, it can be like his special assassin or w/e also. You don't have to be limited to just normal members or whatnot.

03-26-2005, 09:10 AM
okay so basically.... the members thus far are:
how many more do we need.... btw my sketch is almost done... justs needs some scanning....

03-26-2005, 01:03 PM
u forgot iac if he's still in. i think we're good. After each member posts a concept we can move this over to the match forum and start this for real. Note: reason i haven't been making more concepts lately is because i'm having fun screwing around with a newly aquired painter IX..

03-27-2005, 12:14 PM
hey i'm still but i'm tryin to fix my computer but i'm here i'll try to post sumthing tonight

03-28-2005, 09:46 AM
It's typical of me and my style, but I'll work on the girl that Kalithe meets. Should she be a Hume or elf or what? Is it up to my discretion?

03-28-2005, 10:29 AM
Up to you (although preferably not Kaelan..).

03-31-2005, 09:13 PM
Hey, sorry I been away a bit. But I have some concepts for the girl. I first had an idea of a human with sais. Black hair in a ponytail and dark clothes. Then she changed to elf, then there was a complete makeover. So lemme know which one you think would be better.

1st concept:
2nd concept (Pen sketch in notebook):
3rd concept (retry of pen sketch, not digging it at all :mad: ):
4th concept:
5th concept (newest):

04-03-2005, 07:06 AM
so which one are you thinking of using... personally i like the 3rd one... mostly cause i love elfs *drool* good work tho *duel thumbs up*

04-03-2005, 09:46 AM
I guess I was thinking a mix of the last one with short hair, and the suit of the long haired one. But I wanted your guys' input on it. So for starters, she WILL be an elf.

04-04-2005, 08:00 AM
cool i would suggest the short haired one, but with more modern looking clothes. We still need a concept from the others to kick this off.

04-07-2005, 03:34 PM
so uh. whats the deal guys.

04-10-2005, 04:17 PM
sorry bout that but i've been workin on thing and will post as soon as possible

04-11-2005, 12:03 PM
Yeah, I am pretty busy with class and work and such. Are you able to hold it off for a bit? If so, I am in, if not, I will probably have to drop out.

04-11-2005, 03:22 PM
well, i and nyone who is still in will continue posting concepts and eventually start it in the fight club section. You can just hop in when u're less busy, but if u can't join now, i'll go ahead and make the main girl character concept.

04-14-2005, 10:01 AM
I think I remember this on the old forum...

If I remember correctly, I had made a bad guy for this thing. The "emporer" of the bad guys side. I sure hate that it never quite took off like it should have, I think I still have the character sketch of the guy I made for the last one.. if you want I can post him up.... and if you still need artists and think I am up the the "Level" you need... just let me know.

04-15-2005, 10:59 AM
Well, since the background has changed from last time, i don't think your character concept is applicable anymore, but u can definately join.

04-18-2005, 01:49 PM
updated the background information (check the section on Kaelans). Couple landscape and the leader of Neo concepts coming up soon..

04-19-2005, 04:51 AM
more concepts:

Leader of Neo:

Title Pages:


04-30-2005, 06:57 PM

05-02-2005, 07:54 AM
okay so guy i finally started to do the neo leader... but omg omg so much shit has happend... oh well no point crying eh? so anyways i wanted to do the neo leader but i guess that part has been taken... oh well ill put my sketch up anyways... hope you like it


05-02-2005, 08:07 AM
wait so r u still in or what?

05-02-2005, 01:45 PM
i final got my computer workin so im still in

05-02-2005, 09:22 PM
hell yeah im in... i wouldn't miss it for the world

05-03-2005, 05:55 AM
I got to say that look fiy the with the kicking and sourd stuff.Ill have drawings on here to if i knew how to post.can some one please help me with that!!!!!!!!! So i want to know what yall got going cause iam a good drawer and i can probaly help you with that.

05-03-2005, 02:28 PM
like i say i got computer so i can finally post these things

05-04-2005, 07:04 AM
*Edit*(this forum needs a delete post button)

05-04-2005, 07:05 AM
o ure comp was broken? well then. ok iac said that he'll be back in while so, i'll post the main female and an enviroment concept and everyone else post an environment concept. Then we move this to the fight club forum and start with the pages. o and dt45, just read the forum faqs to figure out how to post images and if i see a decent concept and accept u then you're in.

05-04-2005, 04:29 PM
o yeah, here's an example for a environment concept:


And we also need monster/demon concepts like...


05-04-2005, 09:24 PM
SIR YES SIR... ill get to work on the concepts right away... but which neo leader are we using.... mine or yours (i like em both)

Maniac killer
05-07-2005, 07:38 PM
how do you guys do this stuff? I am an ok drawer but hjow do you get in on the comp? I might b in if you tell me ;)

05-08-2005, 08:45 AM
so how arewe going to start this... i have nothing else to do so tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111one

Maniac killer
05-08-2005, 10:17 AM
what do you guys use to color ur drawings in? I have a character....he is a Neo assasin(Found out how to get it on the comp :) )

Maniac killer
05-08-2005, 05:00 PM
little big but all well

I was slopy copy though

anyway N + A thing I thought looked cool but i can change if you don't want.. It means Neo Assasin

Profile of my char:
Name: Blare
WOC: Big sword & some ninja stars

05-08-2005, 07:34 PM
everyone is going to post one more concept, and then we start. I'll start with a few pages as an intro and to get the ball rolling. I'll also post more about how magic and technology and stuff like that works in this world. And...maniac, u just get an image host like www.photobucket.com (http://www.photobucket.com) and upload onto there. Then post the link to your pic in your post or do an image tag. O btw, the Neo leader's name is Fenrir and the his half sister (the main female character) is called Eisa.

Edit: You can also post bios for the characters you create here (make sure it fits reasonably well within the given plot and background of the world). And...once this gets started if nyone can make a webpage for it later (or sooner) that would be great.

05-08-2005, 08:43 PM
okay but whos neo leader are we using?

05-08-2005, 09:04 PM
uhh mine i guess..your guy looks like he should be an elite assassin for The Republic (aka The Revolution)

05-09-2005, 07:07 AM
w00t w00t come on guys... lets get this ball rolling... i really wanna see how this is going to turn out, its rare that we have such a good storyline...

Maniac killer
05-09-2005, 01:07 PM
thnx will do

umm maybe i should make it a little smaller...................how do i shrink?..lol also sry if it is slopy.

Maniac killer
05-10-2005, 02:39 PM
here is another concept:


05-11-2005, 12:05 AM
what the hell is wrong with you, that art should not be allowed.... you know what... its too good for this forum... so leave... now... w00t w00t!! *kezzy sama, over and out*

Maniac killer
05-11-2005, 04:54 AM
?? too good?? I thought it sucked lol.....unless u mean too BIG...I can take that lol...

05-11-2005, 08:13 AM
yeah sorry maniac, but...i want this fight club to be at a certain level and i think you need to improve your skills a bit more before you can join...on a different note, 3 concepts to come tonight.

Maniac killer
05-11-2005, 01:22 PM
This is a fight club tourtament (made by myself to prove worhty & to see how It felt to do 1)



& do you guys take courses? If you do I'm not up to that yet (8th this september!) but I'm goin' I'll com back when I'm better :tear:.....np but "I will Be back!"

Maniac killer
05-13-2005, 03:31 PM
are you guys doing this?

05-21-2005, 07:06 PM
FINALS R OVER, thank god. Back to drawing. Expect a load of concepts in a few days. AND WHERE IS EVERYONE ELSE.

Maniac killer
05-28-2005, 08:31 AM
i was wondering what u were doing....I've been practicing (now drwing jedi)

06-01-2005, 10:46 PM
...Looking for an outlet for my creative energy.

I'm fresh out of college with a B.A. in Graphic Design and yet I haven't been able to find a serious outlet for my illustrative abilites for a long time.

This challenge sounds very engaging and its very well structured; these ar two things like to have while honing my art. If possible I would like to join this challenge if it is not too late. I can commit to a two week time table and I can put up my challenger as early as this weekend.

So would it be possible to join this late in the game?

06-04-2005, 10:08 PM
Although I haven't received any replies to my message I did promise a character sketch so here it is:


Her name is (as it says in the title bar) Danielle Archer. She comes from a nomadic tribe that lives in the mountains. They are a very simple people with a strict martial tradition. She learned how to fight with her hands from her mother and how to fight with a sword from her uncle. She volunteered to take her leper brother's place in the Revolution's Army during the Hume Wars. She served admirably for five years and was discharged at the end of her tour. She's trying to make her way back home on foot, but she is in no hurry (no one in her tribe ever hurries). She's enjoying her time in the wilderness, but she'll spare a few moments if it means helping out a worthy cause.

Age: 27 years old.

Abilities: She can use her sword quite well and she can easily handle herself in a brawl. And she's a crack shot with a pistol. Dani has also mastered the art of "Deng Utei", or "The Flow of Life". It is a martial form in her tribe that focuses on total, unconscious awareness of the environment and the life that fills it. A master of "Deng Utei" simply knows when and where to strike, relying completely on this unconscious awareness. (There are several Deng Utei masters within her tribe, and few thousand spread across the world.)

Demeanor: Happy and free spirited. Being a Deng Utei Master has given her an gentle acceptance of all things in life, including death. Above all she cherishes freedom above all things as well as life and despises needness death (she has only killed one man in her existance and took many prisoners during the Hume wars).

06-05-2005, 04:09 PM
Yeah Jefferson, u're in, since it seems we only have one active person other than me. Can you do a landscape concept? We have NONE of those, and until i see a couple i'm not gonna start this. After all, how can u have a story without a setting? On a different note, my internet connection is kinda on and off right now, so please excuse long absenses. I have a few concepts coming and as soon as i see a couple landscapes I'll start the first pages. Deal?

06-06-2005, 11:19 AM
I'll start in on some landscapes. They are not my forte, but I could definately use the practice. I hope to see some of your landscape concepts soon.

Maniac killer
06-07-2005, 02:01 PM
i got a concept...but i am going to post on work in progress to get crits... then fix then post here...Trust me I've improved.

*edit* here it is (not finished)

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/Maniac731/Blare4.jpg *edit*

06-08-2005, 09:12 PM
Still working on some concepts for this Fight Club. I'm working on an idea for the Revolution Headquarters, a place called Kaelan's Spire on the Old Coast Desert, and Oro's Crater (a Deng Utei safe haven). Should be up Friday or Saturday. Cheers!

Maniac killer
06-09-2005, 04:38 AM
I wanted to know if I could do a dragon concept?

06-11-2005, 02:12 AM
I'm sorry for the size of this file, but I tried my best to keep the load time down. This is my concept for the Revolution's HQ. I wrote some notes on the side and I hope that they are legible. The rendering is sloppy, but I'll use a ruler next time.


06-11-2005, 12:48 PM
Welcome to Kaelan's Spire and the Old Coast Desert. These unusual rock formations were created millions of years ago and faced a deep blue ocean. As the continents shifted, the ocean receeded leaving the Spires facing a great salt desert. Supposedly there are Kaelan hiding out in the many caverns that appear on mesa supporting the spires...


06-11-2005, 08:48 PM
Oros Crater. Named after Oros, the tower that rests on the far side of the crater. Oros also happens to be the name of the Deng Utei master for whom the tower was built. Oros saw in a dream a comet that fell to the earth and an old spirit drowning in a lake. He went to the crater and swam to the deepest part of the lake and found a great gem. Inside the gem was an alien earth elemental that was slowly dying in the dark waters. The Deng Utei master took his own life so that the spirit could use his body to escape. In gratitude the spirit shaped the tower from the very earth and placed the gem into the top of the tower so that Oros' spirit would know where to find the tower when he looked down from the heavens. Each of Oros' seventy-three students were infused with the power of the alien elemental when Oros' body finally died. Twenty-three of these students ferverently guard Oros' remain while the rest travel the world, passing on Oros' wisdom and power.


(Those are my three concepts for now. Waiting for the rest! Cheers!)

06-12-2005, 03:20 PM
those concept or cool i guess i should have check in sum more glad to see it up and run what other concept do we need ?????

06-12-2005, 03:24 PM
ohh can I help!?

06-12-2005, 03:42 PM
To Maniac Killer: I have no idea if you can do a dragon concept, but Sharingan would be able tell you because it is his story concept.

To Crimsongod: Welcome back. I'm new to this Fight Club so it's nice to meet someone else that will be in this. As for concepts, Sharingan said that we were working on the setting for now, but I don't know what else and when he will be back.

To Phobos: Sharingan said that his internet connection is wonky right now, so just keep checking back for his response.

06-12-2005, 04:48 PM
i guess i can finished working on the dragon tride what was they names again???? i could always reread it huh !!!!!!!!

06-14-2005, 03:07 PM
This is to anyone interested and in this fight: I'm still in this fight. I'll work on some more Dani sketches and maybe do some weapon concepts. Peace.

06-16-2005, 08:58 AM
yay finally landscapes. Crimson, reread my first post. Down in the races section you will notice that a different race took the dragon race's place although they are still called the Kaelan. The Demon and half-demon race. Phobos show me what u got and we'll see. As soon as i get the concepts i'm currently working on up, we'll start. Expect to see them on..Monday since i'm going out of town from today-Sunday.

darc shadoe
06-16-2005, 12:46 PM
Can I join?.. although, don't have me down as dependable - I may have to drop out at a later stage - maybe I could do some 'concept' work, bleh...
It's gonna be hard for me to let go of my sketchyness....
I'm gonna have to purchase an eraser now :tear
Then it will be good.
Oh, and a manga pen too, if i can find a pen.... :/

06-17-2005, 08:22 PM
hey i have already drawn sum characters and their cave and the leader of it they can still be calll demons doe (they just look like lizards)

06-20-2005, 01:53 PM
Post them up! You should try crow-quill pens or a nice #2 brush for your inks Darc Shadoe. By the way, I'm still in.

darc shadoe
06-20-2005, 02:02 PM
righteo.... im goin to raid the shops tomorrow, nick the back first, get some cash... =P

Tomorrow im gonna draw like a frenzied irish gobshite!

06-20-2005, 09:40 PM
okay guys... shall i do some weapon concepts?
and i'll work on the dragon concepts crimsongod.... i think im slightly better for the job *hehehe*

06-20-2005, 09:42 PM
oops i mean maniac killer no crimson... sorry m8

06-21-2005, 11:07 AM
I can't wait to see what you come up with Kez1337! What do your Lizardmen look like Crimsongod? Are they ready to post?

06-21-2005, 01:40 PM
naw i'm having scanner problems but i try to post them very soon

this is a very quick strecth sorry for how messy it is .



darc shadoe
06-22-2005, 12:30 PM
sorry people, I have changed my mind... as I do spontaneously and continuosly do...
I apologise for not actually contributing to this...

06-23-2005, 08:21 AM
don't use angelfire...it's not working. try photobucket.com instead

06-23-2005, 02:16 PM
is dat better ?????????

06-23-2005, 05:44 PM
ah yes, much better. ok then as soon as i finish and post the three concepts that i'm working on we'll start. I'd say mmm...3-4 more days, ok?

06-23-2005, 10:27 PM
Cool, I'll be waiting right here!

07-07-2005, 01:04 AM
I'm still in this fight for everyone's information. Is it still live?

07-13-2005, 07:41 AM
I am still waiting to see when this thing goes off. Since I think I asked to join or something like that.

07-13-2005, 12:39 PM
I remember that you asked, but Sharigan has gone AWOL and I have no idea where the rest of the group went. Since there only seems to be two members right now, I don't think Sharigan would mind if you joined Phobos.

Maniac killer
08-01-2005, 05:13 PM
hey u guys want to see it so far?

Maniac killer
08-01-2005, 05:15 PM
well here is a head


I have to fix the neck but other than that thats my dragon head unless u want me to draw a dragon/human or something like that

but I think I'm 100% better at everything but humans

Maniac killer
08-21-2005, 06:10 AM
well I have a dragon/human going but its on the works and progress for sum crits before I post as a concept... ;)

08-21-2005, 04:06 PM
sharingan been gone a very long time:huh: but most of us or waitin on him to show his face

08-23-2005, 05:58 PM
eh, sry for leaving this for so long without a word..i went to a tennis camp for a month on 1 day's notice and have generally been extremely busy with tennis stuff in general over the summer. However, now that school has started again we can get this thing rolling again. I'll post a few concepts i worked on during what little time i had over the summer by tommorrow and then, we go to the matches section and start..

08-24-2005, 12:18 PM
so just to show you that i did at least something...here's a concept of some canyon...i'll decide the name later. It's a wip so...yeah...


Here's another wip concept of Seran, The Revolution's leader. I wanted to make him look more sinister than the old concept...still need to work on his sword. Ideas nyone?


And last but not least...another wip concept of Eisa, the female lead..her weapons will be deer horn knives on really thin, strong strings, but i still have to design those.


I'll finish these eventually...but more importantly, lets start this. First of all everyone post so i know how many are still in and suggestions on how to begin the story would also be nice..

Edit: i have a vague idea of the start but some more soldier/thug concepts and gun/weapon designs would be awesome.

08-25-2005, 06:01 AM
sharingan, i have been following this thread for a while and i was wondering what vehicles are you planning on using(dont worry, i dont want to join in , its just out of curiosity)

08-25-2005, 07:11 AM
Well in the main cities and stuff probably like speeders like Luke Skywalker's in Star Wars or even hover bikes or something like that, but in remote areas, there'll be riding on animals also. Maybe like...lizards? Huge bear things? Giant bird thingys like chocobos? Some vehicle and riding animal concepts would be nice, i'm not too good with animals..

08-25-2005, 11:10 AM
this pic was on google, it might be useful, you could draw it with a saddle ect. and a hume or elf riding it.

Maniac killer
08-26-2005, 05:44 AM
well I left my drawing at my dads house :( so I don't know when I can get my drawing up.....

08-26-2005, 09:27 PM
glad to see you back in action but i'll post about three character tomorrow to help us get back in da swing of thing

08-27-2005, 07:27 PM
I have to pull out of this fight because of work. I don't think I have the time to make the deadlines and I don't want you guys to have to wait for my part of the story. Good luck on the fight!