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Anikraze
04-20-2005, 05:17 PM
this is a pencil comic that i have started two days ago.crits are welcomed. i will post more if demand is high...( this is a repost of my comic in the comics section. post your crits there.... thank you)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/Extinct/HIDEKIpg1.jpg


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/Extinct/HIDEKIpg2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/Extinct/HIDEKIpg3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/Extinct/HIDEKIpg4.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/Extinct/HIDEKIpg5.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/Extinct/HIDEKIpg6.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/Extinct/HIDEKIpg7.jpg

AZmayu
04-20-2005, 05:20 PM
looks really good looks very interesting but only one thing i have to say, my eyes hurst when i read em. can you please CG the texts and that would be great.....

Anikraze
04-20-2005, 05:23 PM
heh.... sorry for the sloppy handwriting. its just that i drew it and posted it.

i guess im used to it ....

Anikraze
04-22-2005, 06:40 AM
no crits or anything... thats just wrong....

unstable monki
04-22-2005, 08:36 AM
should this be in sequential art? instead of here?

DN
04-23-2005, 09:21 PM
I'm locking this because you already put it in the comic section. It's not really a fight club if no other artist is participating.

Also, don't bump threads just to complain that you're not getting crits, especially if you're not listening to the ones you already got. People told you the text should be clearer in both threads. That's a crit.