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the shining
06-01-2005, 07:43 AM
Ok here's the line up.

1 luckeyfold.
2 twitch.
3 me.
(4 anyone else)

Same 2 week deadline.

luckyfold
06-06-2005, 12:26 AM
Just wana update here and let you guys know whats going on. Page 1 is almost all penciled up (yeah I know Im a slacker) however my work schedual has been screwing with me a bit. So yeah tommorow (today really (Monday)) I will have page one done and hopfuly post up the pencils just to let you guys see whats going on. Probably start page 2 tommorow... If i find some good references.

Out.

-Brad

the shining
06-06-2005, 06:07 AM
finally someone posted on here.

Saturn
06-15-2005, 06:02 AM
Have this fc already died?

Twitch
06-15-2005, 08:58 AM
Have this fc already died?

you mean has, and no it hasn't died :huh: ....duh

SpookyDonkey
06-15-2005, 11:21 AM
**** yeah a street riot. Since u said "anyone else" i want in.

luckyfold
06-15-2005, 12:45 PM
UPDATE:
Sorry guys I got one and a half pages done, trying to cram out the second. Works been kicking my ass but I am working on it.

I know my two weeks is up today but it may be another day or two before the seond page is done and inked.

Out.

-Brad

luckyfold
06-17-2005, 01:30 PM
Gosh! Both pages are still not done. However they are scanned. Im posting page one right now, the onlything missing are tones, which I will do and re-post the image. But enjoy what I have!

Page1 ! (182kb) (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/luckyfold/page1.jpg)

I will be out of town tonight and am leaving in like and hr, so maybe I'll try and post the rough rough page 2.

Out.

-Brad

luckyfold
06-17-2005, 01:49 PM
Ahhhhhh... quick post. Twitch I just saw the shinning changed the order so your next... hmm i thought shinning was next!

Anyways Page2 ROUGH (148KB) (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/luckyfold/page2temp.jpg)

Ill describe what is happenening:

Frame1 (very top):
Establishing shot. Basicaly Steak will be bitching about the "24 Hour Store" is closed.

Frame2 (one below on left)
Box is pissed as he wants toothpaste and is bitching about the "24 Hour Store" is closed.

Frame3 (lowest left frame)
Steak is screaming something and throwing Box through the window of the "24 Hour Store"

Frame4 (first frame below Frame1 on right side)
Box is flying through the air.

Frame5 (just below frame 4 on right)
Box is laying on the floor of the store passed out chanting "toothpaste toothpaste thoothpast....."

Frame6 (the bottom right fram)
the shinnings character picks up box and says "Well, well. What do we have here?"

Box keeps saying "toothpaste..thoothpaste..."


Well twitch, your turn I guess. Remember we are all after the toothpaste!

I'll be reposting this eventually (when its done) I just want you to not have to wait on me to do your pages.

so yeah.

Out

-Brad

the shining
06-21-2005, 02:09 PM
wow. I thought this thing was dead already. well since it's going again, then sure spooky donkey, you can join. twitch, your up next.

Twitch
06-21-2005, 09:25 PM
...Hokay, Here we go! (sorry for the poor quality of the drawing, I was rushing to keep this thread alive)
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y199/Twitchsta/fcpg010002.jpg ... :laugh:...that is all.

the shining
06-22-2005, 06:41 AM
I'll get started right away.

luckyfold
06-22-2005, 12:11 PM
cool page twitch!

Here is my toned version of: Page1 (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/luckyfold/Page1Done.jpg)

Now to tone page 2.... oie!

Out

-Brad

digeztive
06-23-2005, 03:05 AM
im sorry but that last page sucked

you couldnt see wot was goin on!

the layout made my eyes water

Twitch
06-23-2005, 07:32 AM
im sorry but that last page sucked

you couldnt see wot was goin on!

the layout made my eyes water
...which is the "last page"...mine...or Luckyfold's, because Luckyfold's page was awsome...(sucked is a harsh word :tear: )
I really can't increase the size...and i didn't want a huge ass pic on the thread (it tends to piss off people)

the shining
06-23-2005, 12:35 PM
i think he's already pissed. anyway I liked it. I got my 2 pages planned and everything. they might be up this weekend if not sooner.

Manga Sims
06-23-2005, 09:45 PM
Lucky. You kick ass!

Twitch. You kick ass, too!

:)

luckyfold
06-23-2005, 11:04 PM
im sorry but that last page sucked

you couldnt see wot was goin on!

the layout made my eyes water

digeztive please, please dont bring that to our <-(edit) thread! I understand Twitch's page is not that great but please do not flat out say it "sucks". People on this board are all at different stages of their artistic life, and really this board is to help people get better. How can you get better without actually doing?

I know twitch said it was rushed, and maybe its a way of saying "I'm not that good at this but will take a shot" I respect that. You dont get better without practice.

So next time you have something to say please try and put it in a constructive way. Such as "Your panel layout is confusing twitch, could ya explain to me what is happening?" or "Good start but here are a few things that you should work on for future pages...."

Just for future referance.


MangaSims:
Thanks it's great to here that from a fellow respected artist!

Out
-Brad

the shining
06-24-2005, 02:10 PM
yeah! Wait, your thread!?

luckyfold
06-24-2005, 10:04 PM
read it again shining....

the shining
06-25-2005, 05:47 AM
dude, I was just kidding.

luckyfold
06-25-2005, 10:38 PM
OK Page 2 (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/luckyfold/page2done.jpg) toned up. More rushed than the first page... ENJOY! :D

OUT

-Brad

the shining
06-28-2005, 07:51 AM
hey guys sorry it's taking me so long. I'm done with one page but I'm still finishing the rough design on the other. I'll hopefully have them up soon.

DynastyX
06-28-2005, 08:33 AM
I'll go fourth I'll have my char pic later today
-DX

Twitch
06-28-2005, 04:00 PM
just make sure you post it in the challeng area...just so we don't waste space on here...Great pages LuckyFold :thumbsup:

luckyfold
06-28-2005, 05:49 PM
Thanks twitch!

the shining
07-01-2005, 10:40 AM
Finally, here's the rough stuff.

PG1 http://img54.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled18lv.jpg
PG2 http://img54.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled28sl.jpg
I think it's dynasty's turn now.
If I have anytime between now and next page, I'll edit these and make them a whole lot better.

luckyfold
07-01-2005, 01:20 PM
Couple things:

DynastyX, are you still in for this or what? You haven't posted a character pic yet?

the shining, Cool pages. I just want to get a few things straight. So basicaly Box is trying to get the toothpaste from under something and the tube starts to rip. Eventually however it does, and everyones jaw drops as if "wtf mate?!" and then Box finnaly can see what happens. Now the second page is your charcter calling Box a bastard.

if I got any of that wrong let me know!

Other than that cool stuff.

-Brad

the shining
07-02-2005, 12:24 PM
yeah your right. It's really under twitch's hammer.

Twitch
07-02-2005, 12:54 PM
Sweet pages the shining...(or can i call you shining :unibrow: lol)...love the way you did my char :thumbsup:

luckyfold
07-03-2005, 09:54 AM
Well guess it's my turn, as DynastyX still hasnt posted a character yet. Holiday weekend so I'll start my pages on Tues

Out!

-Brad

the shining
07-06-2005, 06:38 AM
is dynasty still in this thing?

Twitch
07-09-2005, 12:16 PM
I don't think so..man luckyfold your pages are taking long :D ... i guess they're worth the wait...

the shining
07-10-2005, 02:51 PM
his last ones were the same way.

Twitch
07-10-2005, 02:56 PM
ohh..no dedication lol

luckyfold
07-10-2005, 05:55 PM
Sorry guys, yep they do take a while as I am working lots this week. Will have them done ASAP!

Twitch
07-12-2005, 03:24 PM
man..those pages are taking a long time...lets atleast get a headcount :huh:

the shining
07-12-2005, 03:26 PM
iESTOY AQUI! :D

luckyfold
07-12-2005, 04:54 PM
man..those pages are taking a long time...lets atleast get a headcount :huh:

Yep they are taking a while. I am working on them Promise! :D As soon as I have the inks done I will post just like last time and finnish my pages totaly during someone elses turn. K? Good.

Out

-Brad

velcro animal
07-12-2005, 05:36 PM
keep it going. don't give up.

the shining
07-13-2005, 07:30 AM
Here's the pages so far so we can keep it ordered
Luckyfold Page1 (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/luckyfold/Page1Done.jpg)
Page 2 (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/luckyfold/page2done.jpg)
Twitch
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y199/Twitchsta/fcpg010002.jpg

Me PG1 http://img54.imageshack.us/my.php?i...ntitled18lv.jpg (http://img54.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled18lv.jpg)
PG2 http://img54.imageshack.us/my.php?i...ntitled28sl.jpg (http://img54.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled28sl.jpg)

Twitch
07-13-2005, 01:20 PM
thanks for organizing ^_^ ...I hope luckyfold gets his pages up :tear:

Twitch
07-15-2005, 08:02 AM
luckyfold???helllooooo....anyone

mofo09
07-15-2005, 09:19 AM
this is pretty sweet

Twitch
07-15-2005, 09:03 PM
always nice to hear a compliment...right guys....guys :huh:

luckyfold
07-16-2005, 10:43 AM
ya ya twitch its commin. Im almost done inking my 2 pages (I have one panel left to ink) then scan and clean up, add some text and bam! You can see it and i will tone it up during your turn.

-Brad

twinkieman2k
07-16-2005, 12:02 PM
this is sweet. luckyfold's pages rock! but what is that cheese-like thing that likes beer?!

Eyestrain
07-16-2005, 12:32 PM
I enjoy thoroughly that one of the fighters is in all essence, a handheld-size box. That's definitely something new :D

luckyfold
07-16-2005, 08:35 PM
this is sweet. luckyfold's pages rock! but what is that cheese-like thing that likes beer?!

Lol. Nope hes not cheese. Hes a box... um yeah... Like a jack in the box although I dont normaly draw his handle. Some times.

I enjoy thoroughly that one of the fighters is in all essence, a handheld-size box. That's definitely something new :D

Yes he is a box. In fact his name is Box. Lol. Yeah hes Steak's partner.


Oh yeah guys goodness comming up in the next few hrs. Yep.

*runs away to finnish his pages*

-Brad

luckyfold
07-17-2005, 12:02 AM
Drum roll please......:sarcastic
or maybe not.

Anyways here are my next two pages to the fight.
Both a little on the hefty side (pushing 250kb)

No tones, yet.
Page 1 (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/luckyfold/page3rough.jpg)
Page 2 (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/luckyfold/page4rough.jpg)

Ok twitch go go go go go. :poke:

During your guy's turns i will add tones.

Enjoy all. Sleepy time :sleep:

Out

-Brad

the shining
07-17-2005, 02:01 PM
SWEET. Twitches dude is awesome. great job luckyfold. I expected nothing less.

Eyestrain
07-17-2005, 03:55 PM
Box is full of rage and bad language :P

My mother wouldn't approve. (but I do :D)

Twitch
07-17-2005, 05:42 PM
:laugh: great job Luckyfold..I'll finish mine uber fast :laugh: :dance:

luckyfold
07-17-2005, 09:14 PM
Thanks for the comments guys. Yes box has a dirty, dirty mouth... but then again this is a fight not a walk through daisies....

So yeah lets rock and roll Twitch!

Out

-Brad

the shining
07-25-2005, 03:39 PM
How are those pages coming Twitch?

Twitch
07-25-2005, 03:59 PM
pretty good so far, I'm just trying to finish the minute details...it's hard, because I've had football practice/workouts this entire summer ahh...its really taking a toll :ugh:

the shining
07-30-2005, 06:17 AM
Do you have them ready now? you deadlines coming up.

Twitch
07-30-2005, 02:48 PM
no, not yet...when exactly is my deadline anyway?

the shining
07-31-2005, 12:34 PM
It's today!!! Do you need more time? or should we go on.

the shining
08-01-2005, 01:57 PM
well Twitch wanted us to go ahead so I guess it's my turn. I'll try to get those finished soon.

Twitch: Oh and good luck with Football... :thumbsup2

the shining
08-05-2005, 12:10 PM
[update] My pages are starting to come together. I have started with the first page and the second one is already planned out.

the shining
08-09-2005, 01:44 PM
['nother update] sorry guys haven't had much time to work on my pages between school and the other FC. If Twitch wants to post anything while we're waiting then go ahead.

luckyfold
08-10-2005, 07:45 PM
well well. I thought youd have something up by now. (considering I didnt have an internet conection for a week) anyways keep us up to date.

the shining
08-11-2005, 02:40 PM
I haven't had time to work on it, really. My deadline is monday but I still don't know when I'll be able to work on it again so if my deadline comes up and I still don't have anything then Don't bother asking but It'll be you turn, Luckyfold. Just know I am really trying.

luckyfold
08-11-2005, 05:29 PM
thats cool as now i have an internet connectin and hopefully I can pick up a scanner within my turn time.

-Brad

the shining
08-13-2005, 07:13 AM
Forget I said anything. I completely changed the layout and now Ionly have to ink and add detail and I'm done. and seeing how I've got the rest of the day, then I'll finish it and probably have it up by tommorrow afternoon.

luckyfold
08-14-2005, 08:47 AM
ok sounds good

the shining
08-14-2005, 11:38 AM
is twitch still here?

luckyfold
08-14-2005, 02:57 PM
aint hurd hide nor hair from him

the shining
08-15-2005, 03:11 PM
http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/3318/p17nc.th.jpg (http://img343.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p17nc.jpg)

Ok after a few slopped together effects and dialouges(?) I'm finished. now it's up to you, Luckyfold, to determine the damage done.

Tu[x]edo
08-15-2005, 03:47 PM
Thats kind of small TS..,but it looks good from here.

luckyfold
08-15-2005, 06:17 PM
Ouch, my dude got knifed! lol. Ok if you want ta play like that......

Then a duel we shall have....:squint:

-Brad

the shining
08-16-2005, 01:18 PM
edo']Thats kind of small TS..,but it looks good from here.

your supposed to click on it.

the shining
08-23-2005, 01:25 PM
still no sign of Twitch... is he still in this thing.

the shining
08-26-2005, 01:24 PM
Luckeyfold, how much more do you have on your pages?

luckyfold
08-27-2005, 09:33 AM
A little while yet, I may be asking for an extention... we'll see what happens.

aido179
09-02-2005, 12:28 PM
i sure hope this isnt dead cause it soooo coool