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Steasaurus
07-29-2005, 08:20 PM
Heh heh my first ever fight club ^^

Rules of combat:
*You may do as you wish with any character as long as it is within that characters personality and abilities.
*Do not kill off or seriously injure another members character without their permission (that would take them out of the fight or remove a lot of options for them).
*You may kill off or seriously injure your OWN character at any time.
*Outside interference from non-combatants will be ignored :P
*Also "Keep it fun, Same rules apply here as far as etiquette goes..no personal attacks on religion, race, sex..ect. use "@#*&" to represent swearing...common sense stuff." as well as the other board rules apply.

*Turns will loop until the fight club is over or dies and will be going as follows:
1- Me (Hash (http://polykarbonbbs.com/showpost.php?p=100826&postcount=28))
2- Kaneda! (Kaneda (http://polykarbonbbs.com/showpost.php?p=100565&postcount=19))
x- satanicpanic (sabotaged :P)
3- Xilence Swordswind (Azrael (http://polykarbonbbs.com/showpost.php?p=101280&postcount=36))
4- Phobos (Alphonso (http://polykarbonbbs.com/showpost.php?p=100853&postcount=29))

Here we go!

5te - page01 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page01.png)
5te - page02 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page02.png)
5te - page03 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page03.png)
5te - page04 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page04.png)
Kaneda! - page05 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page05_kaneda.jpg)
Kaneda! - page06 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page06_kaneda.jpg)
Kaneda! - page07 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page07_kaneda.jpg)
Xilence Swordswind - page08 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page08_xilenceswordswind.gif)
Xilence Swordswind - page09 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page09_xilenceswordswind.gif)
Xilence Swordswind - page10 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page10_xilenceswordswind.gif)
Phobos - page11 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page11_phobos.jpg)
5te - page12 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page12.png)

5te - page13 (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page13.png)
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e129/mr5te/fc1/page13.png
**Page 14 in progress!!**

Crits welcomed on stuff by me... I've never really tried much sequential stuff.

mofo09
07-29-2005, 10:04 PM
haha funny

Kaneda!
08-02-2005, 03:11 PM
good, u updated. looks great!

satanicpanic
08-02-2005, 03:18 PM
im out 5te I got dicked over on my scanner...=( its just you four

( ha your last names macdonald hah!)


(jk)

Steasaurus
08-02-2005, 05:18 PM
Okily dokily and what wrong with my last name being Macdonald? lol
My turn is done now so how will Kaneda react to the rather awkward situation? ^^
Stay tuned for a thrilling conclusion :P


If you guys would like me to host the images or put on the text (I know some folk have trouble making it readible) let me know... I don't mind ^^


[more edit]
Keira knightleys mothers maiden name was Macdonald... which kinda makes it creepy that I think she's probably one of the hottest females on the planet... I lurves her.
[/more edit]

[even more edit]
Keira Knightley that is... not her mother.
[/even more edit]

Manga Sims
08-02-2005, 05:34 PM
Wow. 50. Your good.

No, no.

Your awsome!

Keep it up. :D

AZmayu
08-02-2005, 05:34 PM
great pages 5te, very funny :) be coming back for more....

Manga Sims
08-02-2005, 05:35 PM
I beat you Azy. :D

AZmayu
08-02-2005, 05:36 PM
what the hell... i was first... :D

Steasaurus
08-02-2005, 05:39 PM
heh thanks ^^ and I used only a mouse and photoshop... I'm starting to get proud of my mouse skills.

Manga Sims
08-02-2005, 05:49 PM
heh thanks ^^ and I used only a mouse and photoshop... I'm starting to get proud of my mouse skills.

Dude. You just really intemidated (sp?) me.

Great Job...again. :D

Kaneda!
08-02-2005, 06:22 PM
i'm next and i'll try to have everything up by saturday

Kaneda!
08-02-2005, 06:55 PM
i just finished writing my script and will try and start tomorrow morning

satanicpanic
08-02-2005, 07:56 PM
hey I didnt dropout I was sabotaged and I am in the comic .


see on the first page....

it says *PANIC* =P that be me... =D

Xilence Swordswind
08-03-2005, 05:50 AM
nice one and it is really really funny. and the housxe is really dem destoyed to bits. guess i have an idea on my char of wwhat to do.

Steasaurus
08-03-2005, 06:38 AM
ok lol changed dropped out to sabotaged, you get a red x though :P
I also brought the rules we agreed (well no one disputed them) over from the challenge thread as well as what I feel is the most important of the board rules and also linked to the character profiles for good measure.

Kaneda!
08-06-2005, 03:53 PM
i am sorry guys, my cousin came from france to spend the rest of the summer so i was busy. We had to go to DC so she could see the "sights" (nothing much to see if u ask me) anyway i promise i'll have them up soon!

DawnFu
08-07-2005, 02:44 AM
Nice comic 5te I mean so clear and funny.
I just don't understand how you (and other people) did such a thing with PS, I'm kinda noob with it, like... I used it for the 1st time yesterday.
Great work, I'm waiting for more of this fight.

-D.T.59ieme-

Steasaurus
08-07-2005, 05:38 PM
DawnFu: Thanks and don't worry you'll get used to photoshop just stick at it and don't abuse the filters on your pics unless you're doing some kind of graphic design.

Kaneda!: Any idea how long we'll be waiting? ^^ I get anxious...

Kaneda!
08-09-2005, 03:33 PM
i'm sorry i took so long, the pages should've been much better but for some reason it didn't come out as i planned. well here they are, (note the random cute puppy on page 7).

Kaneda!
08-09-2005, 03:35 PM
page 6 on post 1

Kaneda!
08-09-2005, 03:36 PM
pages on post 1

Steasaurus
08-10-2005, 09:26 AM
:D w00t!
I've put them on the first post, and I hope you don't mind but I had touble reading some parts so I did write overs. I didn't have any trouble with page 7 but did a write over so it didn't look out of place :P
Are you finished now? Is it XS to go?

Kaneda!
08-10-2005, 11:41 AM
WOW! thanks 5te i didn't see the pages at first but u helped me a lot by doing the wording and how did u know i'm spiderteenvii? anyway those are the pages from my turn, thanks:)

Steasaurus
08-10-2005, 02:38 PM
magic :) lol

Ok so XS can go now :D

Xilence Swordswind
08-11-2005, 04:16 AM
what the... what happen to the other pages then? people surely want to read em

Kaneda!
08-11-2005, 10:32 AM
they are on the first page XS, they are the same the only difference is the well-done word bubbles

Steasaurus
08-11-2005, 06:21 PM
:unibrow:


...and I linked the pages I drew so the first thread doesn't get too big.
It would be annoying if you had to sit and wait for the pages you have already read to load before you can read the new stuff.

AZmayu
08-11-2005, 06:41 PM
nice going here guys... as Mr Mcdonald would say "I'm loving it" :)

Steasaurus
08-11-2005, 07:05 PM
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/stemacdonald/stuff/pinksquint.gif you takin' the pish? lol

...on a side note. They do in fact... love it ;)

Manga Sims
08-11-2005, 09:36 PM
Awsomeness guys! :)

Keep it going. :)

Kaneda!
08-12-2005, 12:48 PM
thank u sims and everyone

Steasaurus
08-12-2005, 09:07 PM
:D aye cheers guy!

XS any idea when you'll have your pages done? I'm not trying to rush you it's just you've been quiet :P just making sure you're still with us...

Scarn
08-13-2005, 09:34 PM
Is it too late to join? I've been itching to do some comic work since I disbanded my webcomic. *sad* If yes, then I'll be making up a character as I sleep. If no, then I'll just be on my way * shuffles off kicking a can*

Xilence Swordswind
08-14-2005, 06:39 AM
Dont worry bout me. Ive been with PK for quiet some time but i just like reading rather than posting unnecessary comments.

About the strip i drawn the first page on pencil. havent put on the dialogue yet. I think of something.

Steasaurus
08-14-2005, 07:11 AM
Scarn: Unfortunately we're already on our way and the more people in a fight club the longer it takes for a persons turn to come around. Try the challenge (http://www.polykarbonbbs.com/forumdisplay.php?f=20) part of the boards. If you post your character and start a new thread there you'll be pretty much in charge of the fight regarding theme etc. otherewise you can join fights in there.

XS: I was just checking to see if you were still in, so don't worry about the PM. If you like I'll add the dialogue like on Kanedas? up to you... just rough in the dialogue so I know what is being said and where you'd like the bubbles.

Scarn
08-14-2005, 08:38 AM
Aw, nuts.

Xilence Swordswind
08-14-2005, 09:56 AM
Ok thanks! 5te. Im working on my second page right now. Having a hard time to make up a story. but i try my best!

Steasaurus
08-15-2005, 07:10 AM
Don't worry about it :) there haven't been any deadlines set in our rules just keep us informed.

smilinghitman
08-15-2005, 07:10 PM
This stuff is hilarious guys. Keep it up, eh?

Steasaurus
08-15-2005, 09:31 PM
Thanks man... we try ;)

Xilence Swordswind
08-16-2005, 04:01 AM
http://www.geocities.com/xilenceswordswind/PK/PK001.jpg


http://www.geocities.com/xilenceswordswind/PK/PK002.jpg


http://www.geocities.com/xilenceswordswind/PK/PK003.jpg

note

seems that the text has been blurred.

page 1
box1
Azrael: Kaneda, do you think that thing will survive?
box2
Kaneda: Hoho! This i gotta see, Rae... (Rae refers to Azrael)
box3
Hash:Wait!

page2
box3
Kaneda: moron!
Hash: Eh!
box4
Azrael: Too bad he`s back to sleep
Kaneda: Where are you going?
Azrael: Pick up my things and moving out
Kaneda: How bout that thing?
Azrael: Just dont care bout it...

Page3
box2
Kaneda: Wake up moron!
Alphonse: Oww!
box3
Kaneda: WTF! he fainted!

Steasaurus
08-16-2005, 09:26 AM
Ok updated the first post nice work XS ^^ I really like page 10 lol especially the "WTF! he fainted!" pic. I hope you don't mind I moved the text in the final panel of page 9 to make it easier to read through.
XS you're finished your go now right? Phobos now?

Phobos
08-16-2005, 10:15 AM
Sorry guys I wasn't able to post for a while cause I was in virginia. Did I miss anything?

Edit::

Ohh! It's my turn. Ok I will get to work on the pages.

Steasaurus
08-16-2005, 10:36 AM
lol just in time :D your turn just came 'round...

Xilence Swordswind
08-16-2005, 12:16 PM
I hope you don't mind I moved the text in the final panel of page 9 to make it easier to read through. XS you're finished your go now right?

I really dont mind and sure you can do watver you want with it :D . Yeppers Im finish for now. though i want to add more but i have other work to do. haaaiizzz....

Steasaurus
08-16-2005, 06:58 PM
lol I'm considering "meanwhile within the circuitry of hash's brain like thingy..." just to keep me in practice lol


I'm jumping into another FC with the same character against AZ and IAC to keep me in practice instead of the above idea :P don't worry though I'm not leaving this FC.

Phobos
08-21-2005, 10:08 AM
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b238/VisualBlaze/comicpage.jpg
Yeah Here is my page. I would have more but I just started the page today. And since I don't want yall to wait the next person can do their pages.

PS: The last panel was a close up of the energy ball but it got messed up in the scan.

Steasaurus
08-21-2005, 05:32 PM
okee I'll update the first post tomorrow cos I need sleep desperately right now looks good :)
I do believe it's my go now as well? lol

Kaneda!
08-22-2005, 10:07 PM
damn! i haven't been on in a while since i've gone to minnesota but i'm not out, things have been going along well and 5te take your time because i won't be able to use a scanner for about another week

Steasaurus
08-23-2005, 01:36 AM
lol sure I can take my time ;D
I've moved the page to the front... it was readible so I nevver changed it... just added a page number and phobos to it.

Also on a side note do you guys mind if I put these pages on my website type thing once I get it sorted? You're names all mentioned on the pages you've done and I would give credit of course :D

Hopefully this week'll go smoothly, I have a lot of things planned so I'm not sure how much time I have for all these projects :/ this is priority number one on pk since it's the first one of the currently active to have started so I'm not gonna neglect y'all :P

G4Life... and all that jazz!

Steasaurus
08-26-2005, 07:02 PM
I'm not dead... BLAM page 12 prelim!
I picked pointlessly painful colours so your eyes may bleed... just a forewarning :P

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/stemacdonald/stuff/fightclub/page12prelim.jpg

I think I have my work cut out for me with foreshortening etc lol but does it flow ok?
I wanna do one more page after that before it's kaneda again... gonna try and fiddle with it a bit more tonight, maybe finalize parts. Then start on the next page, and then I really gotta do something for the other fc I've committed myself to :D

Steasaurus
08-31-2005, 08:49 AM
BUMP!

Update in 1st post...
Page 13 is in the works, shouldn't be too long.
(personally I'm not happy with the first 2 frames on page 12 but meh what can ya do?)


obviously by "shouldn't be too long" I meant probably tomorrow... or later today since it's now early morning here.

Steasaurus
09-01-2005, 11:06 AM
ok things are complicated now... I have other things to do. I'll try and get the next page up as soon as I can but please don't get annoyed if I take my time.

Kaneda!
09-01-2005, 04:14 PM
condolenses to your friend, i hope i spelled that right
and nice explosion on page 12

Steasaurus
09-03-2005, 11:14 AM
page 13 prelim

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/stemacdonald/stuff/fightclub/page13prelim.gif

I figured Kaneda is next so he can start on his pages after seeing the prelim... that way no ones waiting around forever :)

K - Kaneda
H - Hash
A - Alphonse

justinpoon
10-10-2005, 05:12 PM
amazing

justinpoon
10-10-2005, 05:30 PM
amazing

Ravenshade
10-11-2005, 04:47 AM
erm what's the double post for???

Steasaurus
10-12-2005, 04:56 PM
accident? or maybe it's just double amazing :P lol I forgot about this to be honest =/
I'm gonna finish page 13... uhg page 13 that'll be why it's taken so bloody long.


will definately be up by Friday :D I've decided... and judging by the activity from the other participants I'm assuming this fight is pretty much dead so I'll ive them a chance to get in touch or I'll try and et in touch with then and if I can't get hold of them I might wrap this up :P
I think I've finalised the hardest panels of page 13 so it should be a walk in the park to finish it up.

Steasaurus
10-14-2005, 05:32 AM
I got a PM from Kaneda!
I'm sorry 5te, but i won't be able to continue the match, i haven't been able to keep up my grades so im gonna have to focus on school and it is taking up more time than i originally thought! but if u need ideas on the action or whateva contact me at [email address] since i may not be on the board a lot to PM me back, well good luck and if u can convey my message to the other participants
If the other participants like I'll just wrap it up...

After this is wrapped up I might see about contributing to the Battlebots :P I can't believe I haven't posted anything for that yet :S

Steasaurus
03-12-2006, 01:39 PM
Yeah I haven't forgotten about this... I rushed a page today and I've updated the links for the other pages. I'll finish this up in one or two more pages. I have a plan :)