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Enigmatic_Delugar
12-01-2004, 01:52 PM
The First Page::

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/Project1.png

People In The FC Already::
-(My Character) Riku (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v152/Enoki/ScannedPhoto-1-2.jpg)
-Mofo09 (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v252/mofo09/narutothingchracter.jpg)
-Bahamut (Raijoul) (http://bahamutflare.com/comic/rai.jpg)
-Sagaseeds (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v446/losseiel/kazeka.jpg)

-I will finish the rest of the pages later. I am only done with page 1. I was to lazy to color some pages sadly......I don't know why its so small though.

mofo09
12-02-2004, 09:58 AM
here is the official site for the fight!!!
http://members.tripod.com/supa_fly11/mizuhatheninjaacademy/

other site with mizuha...

-----http://members.tripod.com/supa_fly11/id46.html------

Ninken
12-02-2004, 10:23 AM
thats kewl
i made an intro page too. ^^

http://www.freewebs.com/ninken/mizuha%20intropage.jpg

copy & paste :laugh:

mofo09
12-02-2004, 10:32 AM
so who goes next?

Enigmatic_Delugar
12-02-2004, 12:07 PM
-(My Character) Riku
-Mofo09
-Bahamut (Raijoul)
-Sagaseeds
-Ninpou (Or Ninken Now)

-That is the order. But since ninpou already made intro page if he/or she wants to they can make a page. Then you go mofo then bahamut (if he comes back on) then sagaseeds and last ninpou again. There is a 4 page limit and a time limit of 2 weeks to get them up.

mofo09
12-02-2004, 07:15 PM
ok so what exactly do you want me to do now since theres kinda a story and everything...should i just start introducing the characters and the academy and stuff

Enigmatic_Delugar
12-02-2004, 07:21 PM
Hmm, well you can either make an introduction of your character or you can pick something that we are all doing like training or something like that. Then we will all post from where you left off.

mofo09
12-02-2004, 07:33 PM
ok but im not sure i know what im doing but ill come up with something

mofo09
12-02-2004, 08:06 PM
um ok for this thing i need to ask you something....
so its kinda like naruto in a sense of the classes and training and stuff right so how many people are in one class? is it just gonna be the characters that we've created?

Enigmatic_Delugar
12-03-2004, 02:25 PM
Its usually three in Naruto but I will make this one six.

mofo09
12-03-2004, 02:32 PM
k so i need a picture of everyone character

Sagaseeds
12-03-2004, 05:37 PM
All the characters' pictures are in the first post. Just click on the names. I'm adding the costumed sketch here just for the costume itself. =P

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v446/losseiel/kaze.jpg

Kazeka's a straightforward person, friendly but stubborn, though she will make up for it if she knows she's made a mistake. But if she believes she's right (might not necessarily be true), she won't back down. I think that's basically how she'll be like for the duration of this fight club, with minor changes here and there.

mofo09
12-03-2004, 06:37 PM
ok sweet, so theres only 4 people in this? if so i have all the characters and ill start right away

Sagaseeds
12-03-2004, 06:50 PM
ED, you said 'six'. One thing to consider is if that's too big a group and secondly... There're only five people, maximum, in this.

Enigmatic_Delugar
12-03-2004, 07:13 PM
I know I was thinking of having 2 npc's but I guess we will only have 5. Hey mofo in the beginning post I forgot about Ninpou who was in this so there is 5 people.

mofo09
12-03-2004, 07:44 PM
oh right ninpou, so has he made a character yet?

Enigmatic_Delugar
12-03-2004, 08:00 PM
-Ninpou's character Ninpou's character (http://www.freewebs.com/ninken/ninjagirl.jpg)

mofo09
12-03-2004, 09:19 PM
k i just finished the first page, im gonna do one or two more

Phunin
12-04-2004, 11:13 AM
Yes, now we can get this thing started. (I am enigmatic_Delugar but my bro wanted that one so now that account is his.)

mofo09
12-04-2004, 11:39 AM
ok sweet, i just finished the second page, and i gotta do one more

mofo09
12-04-2004, 10:38 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v252/mofo09/mizuhapg1copy.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v252/mofo09/mizuhapg2copy.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v252/mofo09/mizuhapg3copy.jpg

Phunin
12-05-2004, 10:28 AM
Woah, nice pages. Is that all the pages you want for your turn or do you want to do more pages?

mofo09
12-05-2004, 10:41 AM
nah im done

Sagaseeds
12-06-2004, 04:56 AM
Does Bahamut know that it's moved here?

And nice pages, mofo09. ^^

mofo09
12-07-2004, 04:44 AM
i dunno, whos next?

Sagaseeds
12-07-2004, 06:04 AM
Bahamut. And after Bahamut's turn is mine, which is why I'm asking. =P

mofo09
12-07-2004, 12:57 PM
ok wheres bahamut

Sagaseeds
12-11-2004, 03:34 AM
Does anyone mind if I take up the next couple of pages, since it's been more than a few days and there's no sign of Bahamut?

Phunin
12-11-2004, 06:06 AM
I don't mind....

Sagaseeds
12-11-2004, 08:46 PM
Ok then. ^^

Sagaseeds
12-13-2004, 05:32 AM
Sorry... >_< Can Ninken go first? Because I'll be very busy with a costume for this next week or so, so can I switch places with Ninken? Gomen nasai. >_<;;;

Ninken
12-13-2004, 09:24 AM
hai!^^

Sagaseeds
12-14-2004, 05:19 AM
Domo arigatou! ^_^

mofo09
12-14-2004, 06:58 PM
ching chung pow chang

Ninken
12-15-2004, 09:04 AM
... i hate this page... its big too.
http://www.freewebs.com/ninken/mizuha%20p1.jpg

:ugh:

mofo09
12-15-2004, 01:31 PM
thats sweet

Sagaseeds
12-15-2004, 05:13 PM
It's nice. ^^ Are you going to continue with anymore pages...?

Phunin
12-16-2004, 12:26 PM
Yeah is that all the pages you are are going to do? In the future post if you are done with your pages.

Ninken
12-18-2004, 07:58 AM
i am done -.-

mofo09
12-18-2004, 09:31 AM
aight so is sagaseeds next?

Sagaseeds
12-18-2004, 07:02 PM
Hai. Costume making over. *happy* ^_^ I can get to work on the pages now.

Jonat
12-18-2004, 10:19 PM
Hey, nice stuff you got going here. Like what is goig on and everything, good art, good flow. Wish that 'the Escape from Ninja High' FC would open back-up here. I pretty sure it died though. Oh well, Mathias will just have to wait and show his Jutsu elsewhere. Maybe here, if you all don't mind me jumping in.

Hold that, I still have a malfunctioning scanner, and I'm not 100% on me getting my tablet for christmas. I'll check back in after christmas. That is, if you all don't mind another joining in.

mofo09
12-19-2004, 07:20 AM
i dont mind

Phunin
12-19-2004, 07:52 AM
I don't mind. Hey Guys can you post all of this stuff in the challenge forum I posted before. This thread is getting messy. Lets just keep this thread for pages and page comments (and if you wanna skip your turn).

mofo09
12-19-2004, 03:40 PM
why dont we just put all the pages on the first page

mofo09
12-19-2004, 06:30 PM
hey wait a minute
i got an idea
why dont we start a thread in the sketchbook place and we can put in the comic and the sketches we make like to make the characters and stuff, or just liek any art that is about the comic.

Phunin
12-19-2004, 06:38 PM
Sure we can do that or I can make a website that will have the comic pages so it will be cleaner and better looking. Its all of your choices.

mofo09
12-19-2004, 06:45 PM
that sounds fine, do you know how to make web sites?

Phunin
12-19-2004, 06:52 PM
Of Course

mofo09
12-19-2004, 06:58 PM
oh ok

Jonat
12-19-2004, 08:59 PM
All right, I'll make sure to try and freshen up on my drawing skills, I've been out for a while, and I'll amke sure to inform you if I get that tablet or not, cause if I don't, I need to find another way of posting. Thanks again everyone.

mofo09
12-20-2004, 10:18 AM
what?

Jonat
12-20-2004, 09:10 PM
Right now, my scanner is broke, I believe I am getting a Tablet for christmas. If I don't, I have to find another way to get my drawings on here.

Also, I haven't drawn anything in about 2 months, so I'm a little rusty.

I was posting in response to getting an okay on joining in.

Phunin
12-21-2004, 02:54 AM
Ohh, yeah sure.

mofo09
12-22-2004, 06:08 PM
so whos up

Jonat
12-25-2004, 08:06 AM
Well, I got my tablet this morning, I'll be working with it for most of the day, to try and get stuff down with it. Hopefully I'll have a character sketch up by the end of tomorrow.

BahamutFlare
12-28-2004, 11:45 AM
sorry i disappeared... after whoever... i'll get right on it :D

edit* here's what I did for now to get going...sorry for absence once again
btw...thanks phunin for hosting it for the time being...

i thought the match between that girl and mofo's dude went fast. hope that doesn't happen for my character. thinking bout a longer match.
anyway... i guess i got no one else to fight and it's only logical that my next opponent be mofo's dude. as u can see from my page they are looking at each other.

http://kh2.cubicnetwork.net/comicrai1.jpg
thanks for reminding me

mofo09
12-28-2004, 03:19 PM
nice, whos next now.....we really should get an updated list

Phunin
12-28-2004, 03:24 PM
-Mofo09
-Bahamut
-Sagaseeds
-Phunin
-Ninken

mofo09
12-28-2004, 06:35 PM
okie dokie

mofo09
01-01-2005, 12:29 PM
so wheres sagaseeds

Phunin
01-01-2005, 02:45 PM
Sagas going to have to upload it when he or she gets back to school.Since he or she doesn't have a scanner.

mofo09
01-01-2005, 07:34 PM
ah ok

Ninken
01-05-2005, 09:07 AM
those pages better be high detailed for making me wait so long :pirate:

mofo09
01-05-2005, 12:38 PM
lol

Phunin
01-07-2005, 04:27 AM
Ok,Sagaseeds. I am giving you till monday to do it and if you don't have it by then I'll probably make your character get jumped by super ninja monkeys -.-. And thats your strike 1 -.-

Ninken
01-08-2005, 03:04 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v318/ninken/ninjamonkey.jpg

mofo09
01-08-2005, 03:29 PM
nice...monkey

BahamutFlare
01-10-2005, 07:22 AM
this comic tread doesn't seem to be going anywhere... damn is segaseeds slow

i say jump him already!

Phunin
01-10-2005, 12:18 PM
Since saga didn't feel like listening when I said post on this thread that he will skip his turn he got a strike one. I am seriously going to put him getting jumped by ninja monkeys in my next turn. So for now the next person goes.

mofo09
01-10-2005, 02:39 PM
ok whos next?

Phunin
01-10-2005, 03:07 PM
Me......I will get them up as soon as possible.

Ninken
01-11-2005, 07:28 AM
finally >_<

Sharingan
01-13-2005, 12:24 PM
If Sagaseeds doesn't come back, I'll take his spot XD. Naruto is my all time favorite manga

Sagaseeds
01-16-2005, 04:45 AM
I'm sorry! >__< It's just that so many things are going on at school and the person who was supposed to scan my stuff kept neglecting to do so! I haven't been able to be online very much either. @_@;;; I'm going to search around for another scanner. In the meantime, I'm sorry, but I have to skip my turn. >< And I'm a girl. ^_^;;

Sharingan
01-18-2005, 10:32 AM
ahaha...im really sorry for calling you a guy saga XD, it's just that...you can't tell these things on the net...sorryyyy..

o yeah if there's room for one more i'd love to join lol

Sagaseeds
01-18-2005, 02:28 PM
It's okay. ^^;;

mofo09
01-18-2005, 03:43 PM
so whooooooooooooooooo is going? phunins turn isnt it?

Ninken
01-21-2005, 02:58 PM
sloow :crying:

koopdi
01-23-2005, 11:03 AM
Haha, puny mortals and your dependancy on linear time!

mofo09
01-23-2005, 11:14 AM
yea... this is taking too long..... ROLE CALL!!! who is still here???? say so or else your out!!

meanwhile imma make the next pages

mofo09
01-23-2005, 11:31 AM
-Mofo09
-Bahamut
-Sagaseeds
-Phunin
-Ninken
-sharingan ( if he wants to join )

makogen
01-24-2005, 12:22 AM
HEY!
lemie join PLZ!!!!
ahem...
onegai shimasu 'v'O_O'v' (DA PUPPY EYES...)


No but seriously, may I join as well? I've got four REALLY ROUGH pages I threw together to try to get your attention. and uh...mofo....sorry about your butt...you've still got 999 years of pain to go. ^_*
http://infinitygate.4t.com/images/roughcomicpage1.gif
http://infinitygate.4t.com/images/roughcomicpage2.gif
http://infinitygate.4t.com/images/roughcomicpage3.gif
http://infinitygate.4t.com/images/roughcomicpage4.gif

they are not that good, again I threw them together really fast so i could post them tonight...err...this morning....-_-'''...whatever

...couldn't sleep, the first set of pages was soooo ugly I started to redraw them... I finished one not too long ago...so here it is
http://infinitygate.4t.com/images/comicpage1.gif
hope you like it...
SRY my links didn't work...here are the pages in the above order...
http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/roughcomicpage1.gif (http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/roughcomicpage1.gif)
http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/roughcomicpage2.gif (http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/roughcomicpage2.gif)
http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/roughcomicpage3.gif (http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/roughcomicpage3.gif)
http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/roughcomicpage4.gif (http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/roughcomicpage4.gif)
and the updated first page:
http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/comicpage1.gif

Sagaseeds
01-24-2005, 06:14 AM
Here, but busy. @_@;;

Ninken
01-24-2005, 08:11 AM
miaow

mofo09
01-24-2005, 12:50 PM
ok makogen you can join....so i guess we got 4 people in including me. im gonna scan the page i did and post it up hopefully by today

mofo09
01-24-2005, 02:53 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v252/mofo09/mihuza5.jpg

Phunin
01-24-2005, 04:04 PM
Thanks mofo. I was kinda wrapped up with life....mainly my evil school work. Won't happen again. I am just gonna do one page.....amazing how you run this fc better than me mofo -.-.

mofo09
01-24-2005, 04:07 PM
haha ok

Sharingan
01-24-2005, 07:27 PM
-Mofo09
-Bahamut
-Sagaseeds
-Phunin
-Ninken
-sharingan ( if he wants to join )

yupyup i wanna join, i'l have a character sketch up in a jiffy (<< did u know that that's a real unit of time lolz)

o yeah, question, are we allowed to use abilities mentioned in the naruto series (e.g. a charcter with sharingan or byakugan or the ability to open gates)

mofo09
01-24-2005, 08:06 PM
yes apparently it is a naruto type thing so yea i guess everything in narutp you can do here

Denzive
01-24-2005, 08:07 PM
i luvin da fight =]

makogen
01-25-2005, 05:12 AM
so who's turn is it next?
i'm redrawing my 4 pages so I'll be ready to post in a few days...
I'm also trying a hand at coloring them--as a learning exercise.

mofo09
01-25-2005, 05:18 AM
phunin says he was doing a page....we'll give him a few days

Sagaseeds
01-27-2005, 03:59 AM
Sharingan: So far, I'm assuming this fight takes place in a smaller shinobi village in the Naruto universe. (If I'm right) You can have your character use the Sharingan and Byakugan, but only if they're related to the Uchiha or Hyuuga by blood and it can't be be too distant a relation, else the bloodline won't come into effect. Advanced Bloodline techniques can only be used by a certain clan.

All other generic techniques like the kawarimi no jutsu and the henge no jutsu can be used by everybody else.

Phunin
01-27-2005, 04:58 AM
I'm trying to draw the page I am doing on my new tablet. So expect to see the page today or tommorow.

mofo09
01-27-2005, 08:20 AM
what the hell are you talking about sagaseeds

Sharingan
01-27-2005, 08:56 AM
eh she's just talking naruto jargon. character will be scanned tonight. He's an uchiha (we'll just say he was an illegitimate child that itachi didn't know about when he slaughtered his clan)

Phunin
01-27-2005, 03:38 PM
No,no,no,no,no....the characters can't have anything to do with naruto. But you can use some of their skills.

Sharingan
01-27-2005, 04:21 PM
ok...but how do u use some of their skills if u don't have nything to do with them. (e.g. u want to have the byakugan as a skill but aren't a hyuuga? :confused: )

Phunin
01-27-2005, 05:05 PM
...you got me right there....fine do what you want.

mofo09
01-27-2005, 06:42 PM
dude!! who cares!! you think i know anything about this naruto shit? noooo way hosee! just do whatever you want!

makogen
01-28-2005, 12:56 AM
Remember that Kakashi isn't sharingun and he has the eye, even though it's not complete. Remember how he got it, I think one of his friends died and he took it or something. Anyways, I'm just saying there are more ways to get these techniqes(?) than to be born with it, be creative and find a way to bring it in, say for instance, instead of being an uchiha clan member that Itachi missed, that his father was a monk who found the secret of the copy wheel eye, and after sacrficing or whatever he found a way to use it. Then when his son was born (without the eye) he taught it to him and started him on training before he came to mizuha. I don't know something more creative I guess, but make it interesting---and make it make sense.


almost done with redrawing my pages, just two more to go...then I'll start my next 4, I'm thinking, my character is like 17, or 18, but he's coming to learn the secret Mizuha techinques, so he might be the oldest one there...and if anyone wants to choreograph anything with me...say so, I'd love to do a choreographed fight scene...I've got some suprises in my next 4 pages...~

also, wouldn't the place be mizugakure?

mofo09
01-28-2005, 06:00 AM
ok ill leave the family techinique shit to you guys, i guess i can work on the "choregraphy" of the mihuza stuff

Sharingan
01-28-2005, 10:54 AM
wait so is it makogen's turn right now? i have some time this weekend so i can go next..

mofo09
01-28-2005, 01:23 PM
ok go then

Sagaseeds
01-29-2005, 03:39 AM
I suppose there are other ways, but it's still an Advanced Bloodline after all, indicating that the particular technique is not so much of a technique, but a hereditary skill, passed on through the DNA. Their bodies are not normal.

Mizugakure? Why? (I'm not opposed to the idea; I'm just curious why because my knowledge of Japanese is very very limited. :P)

mofo09
01-29-2005, 07:18 AM
does it REALLY matter that they have the same moves?? its not like this IS the naruto, its some a fight

Phunin
01-29-2005, 08:04 AM
This is taking too long. I am gonig to suffer the penalty someone else just go.

mofo09
01-29-2005, 08:35 AM
shirangan is gonna go

Sharingan
01-29-2005, 12:50 PM
can some1 give me a plot synopsis just so i can confirm if what i think is going on really is?

mofo09
01-29-2005, 01:04 PM
were fighting.... its the big puffy haired girl vs that guy with the three scar type things on his face....in the last page she jumped from behind him, you figure out what happens next

Sharingan
01-29-2005, 01:25 PM
so is that sagaseed's and delugar's chracters in the academy?

Edit: it's not sagaseed's chracter...so who is the poofy haired girl?

mofo09
01-29-2005, 01:58 PM
look at my pages you'll see her

makogen
01-29-2005, 06:52 PM
i say mizugakure because it means (i think) village hidden in the water...but that's where the mizukage lives which would make us a world power and not so secret after all...bakufugakure means village hidden in the waterfall...but Mizuha sounds better...still can't figure out what mizuha means tho...

Sharingan
01-30-2005, 10:26 PM
hmmm...did we ever post bio's? What kinda techniques/ninjutsu/abilities does your character have delugar? ...and the girl also?

Regarding my pages, I'm thinking about making 3 or 4 and done with the first page and thumbnails done for 2 more and pondering about a fourth so hang tight guys. O, and do u want me to post em one by one while i finish 'em or all at once (i'll have 'em all done by at least friday)?

mofo09
01-30-2005, 11:03 PM
dudeeee please dont tell me we need techniques

Sharingan
01-30-2005, 11:13 PM
i just mean something that the characters r especially good at. Like they're fast, or use fire type jutsu or something to that effect..

Phunin
01-31-2005, 04:04 AM
Ok,you have a character,they do ninjitsu, and they fight . Now someone do pages.

mofo09
01-31-2005, 09:09 AM
yea dude just do your pages

Sharingan
01-31-2005, 10:53 PM
alright here's my first page finally. I wasn't really sure about the girl's hair cuz some ppl drew it spikey and others poofy so i chose spikey cuz i thought it looked better. I might add rendering, more backgrounds, and get a better scan sometime later.

Link (http://www.geocities.com/animecrzi/mizuha1copy.jpg)

3 more to come soon.

Edit: the reason it's blinding white is because i ran it through levels in photoshop to get rid of smudges, but clicked on too dark a color for pure white =/

Ninken
02-02-2005, 08:39 AM
very nice
.dont forget her swords.

mofo09
02-02-2005, 08:44 AM
ok makogen go now

makogen
02-02-2005, 10:36 PM
OK ill pick it up here, hope you don't mind if I finish this fight with a flash eh?

I'll try to have them done by friday, saturday at the latest, going for 4 pages, I'll post them as I complete them. Here I go.

Sharingan
02-02-2005, 11:08 PM
eh..i said i had 3 more..but thats fine
i'll just post one more then.

makogen
02-02-2005, 11:54 PM
hey who are these two characters? what are their names? I remember the poofy haired girl, but the guy with the whiskers...? at first I thought he was shira, but after re-reading the pages, he's not...anyways can I get anymore info.

sorry sharingun...
I'll wait for your last post and pick up from there...just say when you're done.
In the mean time I'll post my characters (I have two main characters) either tomorrow or the day after. bios and all.

mofo09
02-03-2005, 06:27 AM
oh sorry shin, you go post your pages first

mako ill get the link for the people's bios and stuff

mofo09
02-03-2005, 06:40 AM
http://p084.ezboard.com/fpolykarbonbbsfrm20.showMessage?topicID=1084.topic

go there for the old thing

makogen
02-04-2005, 01:21 AM
ok cool... I got a feel for the characters...cool.

my first character's pic should be up tomorrow...i got home from work late and couldn't scan it... anyways, here's a short bio.

Name: Makogen
Age: 18 or 19
race: black
height: 6'1"
weight: 145lbs

Makogen was raised in hikarigakure (the village hidden in the light), where the hidden arts of kamijutsu and kaijutsu are taught (they are similar to advanced bloodline techs, but only a few are chosen). He excelled in his learning, and was given one of the four Sacred Bokken(s?). After becoming a jounin at age 13, he left his village to learn from other schools, he traveled to the villages hidden in the sand, sound, wind, and leaves and learned many new techniques.

The hikarigakure techniques involve bending, reflecting, and redirecting light, so the user can become invisible. Also, combined with the konohakage techniques, and the kage bushinin techniques (one of his favorites) Makogen plays confusing games with his opponents, but much like Shikamaru, he knows when to give in. He rarely uses the Sacred bokkken, and relys mostly on his speed and jutsus to take out his enemies, he carries tools for genjutsu (smoke bombs, dummies), but never a sharp steel weapon, never a kunai, and never a true sword.

Makogen's bokken (not the sacred bokken) is a channel for his chakra, he focuses his chakra into the wood, and it becomes harder than steel, and he can sharpen or dull it with chakra. His sword style is very samurai-esque, but with a ninja twist, he was the fastest draw in Hikarigakure, and the most dangerous swordsman.

Very honorable, he never breaks his word, if one betrays a promise, his fury is incomparable to anything else. Maybe not a ladies man (like Brock ^_^' not a sasuke, but he tries). Food is one of his weaknessess, and too bad he can't grow fat like Chouji because of his fast metabolism.

So all in all, we have a jack of all trades, master of light, student at heart, chivalric, life preservant (I forgot overprotective of girls) responsible, food loving, fun loving (I also forgot he's a joker and prankster which show in his fighting style)considerate, heroic kind of guy...I hope that covers him.

He wears a black denim trench coat, white kung-fu vest (I think it is), and brown mountain boots. He has an afro, and green eyes. I'll try to introduce him in my next four, Mizuha is next on his roadtrip.

Sharingan
02-04-2005, 05:41 AM
my other two pages will be up by tommorrow. Until then, here's my character..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v645/animecrzi/sourencopy.jpg

Bio:
Name: (Uchiha) Souren [doesn't know the Uchiha part yet]
Age: 16
height: 5'10''
weight: 140 lbs
hair color: black
Eye color: amber normally, but turns red with Sharingan activated
Weapons: kunai, shuriken, ninja-to
Ninjutsu: basic ninjutsu, Fire and Earth elements (katon and doton)
Special abilities: Sharingan, pretty fast and smart (top speed is equivalent to rock lee without weights)
Special Ninjutsu/Technique: Special Seal on right arm, when unleashed has a devastating wind type jutsu that surrounds his arm. Has incredible destructive power for a short period of time but uses 75% of chakra to release the seal.

Background: He thinks that he was born and raised in Mizuha and his parents died when he was young while on a mission together. He has always been at or near the top of his class, working very hard hoping to find his parent's killers one day and kill them. What he doesn't know is that he is a direct descendent of the Uchiha blood line and was raised in Konoha until 2 years old. Then, he got a strange disease and the only medical ninja with the neccessary techniques to heal him was in mizuha. The seal on his arm came from this strange disease. Some kind of wind demon infested his arm and in order to prevent it from devouring his whole body, the medical ninja had to place a powerful seal on it. His parents dropped him off there and had to return to Konoha for a mission, only to get killed by Itachi. So the mizuha residents all agreed to make up a story to tell him when he got older and a family took care of him until he was old enough to live on his own.

Edit: I'm still working on this pic and plan to color it so that's why he's missing ear details, bandages on right arm, and an eyebrow lol

makogen
02-07-2005, 12:55 AM
here's a quick sketch of my char...to go with my bio, sorry it took so long to post it, my comps buggin...

http://www.freewebs.com/makogen/images/mako.gif

Sharingan
02-07-2005, 08:13 AM
sry i got caught up in a couple other pieces that i was doing. Pages will be up tommorrow or the next day..

makogen
02-15-2005, 12:47 PM
hey what's going on?

Sharingun, are you still going to post the next pages? I really want to go...

mofo09
02-15-2005, 12:48 PM
makogen u just go

makogen
02-16-2005, 02:12 PM
right, I need aproxamately 3 days

mofo09
02-16-2005, 03:20 PM
no problem

makogen
02-22-2005, 12:03 PM
almost done. I'll post the first tomorrow.

makogen
02-23-2005, 05:58 PM
sorry again, I had some computer problems, I'll try to upload tomorrow at school.

Ninken
02-24-2005, 09:51 AM
omg.....

makogen
02-24-2005, 12:03 PM
ok here's the first page...sorry, it took longer than i expected.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v736/makogen/mizuha1.gifsorry about the last frame, I wanted to hurry it up, and so it shows...I'll do better next time.
I think I can wrap up the fight in two more pages.

mofo09
02-24-2005, 01:37 PM
sweet

Ninken
02-26-2005, 04:07 AM
whos turn?

mofo09
02-26-2005, 09:56 AM
-Mofo09
-Bahamut
-Sagaseeds
-Phunin
-Ninken
-sharingan
-makogen

sagaseeds should be going, since he never went yet

so heres a new rule, if you dont reply within 3 days of your turn your get skipped. i WILL be enforcing this rule to keep the fight going :D


PS... im sure everyone will be gald to hear that im putting this on my web site. this way everything will be IN ORDER!! :eek: oh my! ....oh yes...in order... the page will contain everyones sketches and stuff too, so if you need the origional drawings for referance, go there

heres the link -

http://members.tripod.com/supa_fly11/id46.html

PSS.... im making Mizuha its own site, which is here http://members.tripod.com/supa_fly11/mizuhatheninjaacademy/ its not done yet, but im working on it!

Phunin
02-27-2005, 06:08 PM
I'm drawing the pages now just incase he doesn't reply.

mofo09
02-27-2005, 06:41 PM
ok good

makogen
02-28-2005, 10:35 AM
sry, I got caught up...I'll be faster next time

Sharingan
03-01-2005, 09:10 AM
sry i didn't reply in such a long time. I got caught up in school and everything. I'm glad you skipped me (and i couldn't find the other two roughs i sketched anyway). Anxious to see the next pages.

O yeah I'll make some intro pages and maybe a title page for our fight.

Edit: Here's a 2 minute concept sketch of my char, [Uchiha] Souren

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v645/animecrzi/Souren.jpg

Sharingan
03-03-2005, 10:52 PM
btw nyone alive?

mofo09
03-04-2005, 05:02 AM
yea whats his name was suppose to make pages, but looks like hes late so i will make a few pages, and have em up by hopefully tommorrow or on the weekend

Phunin
03-05-2005, 09:18 AM
Yes I am alive. If you don't end the fight then I will mofo.

mofo09
03-05-2005, 03:35 PM
im ending the fight, dont worry ill have them up by tommorrow

ps... ninken, is your character named ninken too?

mofo09
03-06-2005, 05:55 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v252/mofo09/pg10.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v252/mofo09/pg11.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v252/mofo09/pg12.jpg

Ninken
03-07-2005, 11:11 AM
sweee ET thats like.. wiiiiiicked.. but my character would actually kick his ass, anyway
YOU ROCK!

mofo09
03-07-2005, 12:37 PM
lol thanks...i made a mistake though with one of the bubbles on the last page (which is now fixed)

i did want you char to win but it was easier to have him just throw you by the leg rather than my other idea which was for you to kick him across the room with the other foot....now taht i think of it taht probably would have been cooler...

Phunin
03-07-2005, 01:48 PM
I guess its my turn.......ok I am gonna make us go back to class and do something I just thought up.

mofo09
03-07-2005, 02:26 PM
alrighty, dont take too long though eh

Ninken
03-08-2005, 09:07 AM
if you take too long...
we will punish you.

mofo09
03-08-2005, 12:34 PM
yes, yes we will

Sharingan
03-13-2005, 06:42 PM
eh its been 6 days, this mean we're skipping phunin?

mofo09
03-13-2005, 07:12 PM
phunin where the hell r u , we're gonna skip u, whos next?

Sharingan
03-13-2005, 07:14 PM
according to one of your previous posts, its ninken..

mofo09
03-13-2005, 07:14 PM
ok then ninken go

Phunin
03-14-2005, 03:05 AM
o.O,I just finished the pages yesterday night....forget it -.-.

mofo09
03-14-2005, 04:42 AM
ok then post em quick

mofo09
03-15-2005, 07:01 AM
ok then since your not posting dude, where the hell is ninken

Sharingan
03-16-2005, 11:52 AM
no clue.

mofo09
03-16-2005, 01:04 PM
if he doesnt show sharingan u wanna go?

Ninken
03-17-2005, 05:15 AM
im here ffs

makogen
03-17-2005, 11:41 AM
C'mon man....If you're not going to post tell us plz, sure things come up, but it holds us up if we're in the dark. The three day rule must be enforced.

Sharingan
03-17-2005, 12:12 PM
Ninken, go dude.

mofo09
03-17-2005, 12:53 PM
yea your right mako its should, but i forget realy easily so you guys should help me out sometimes, but for now ninken you go, hurry up too and if you need more time tell us within 3 days

Ninken
03-17-2005, 12:59 PM
dude I start with my pages as soon as its my turn (or realize that it is) ,
check it out.. its kinda' lame though
copy & paste
http://www.freewebs.com/ninken/mizuha.jpg

mofo09
03-17-2005, 01:07 PM
sweet man, u rock
so are you done?

Ninken
03-19-2005, 04:34 AM
yes i only do one page. always

mofo09
03-19-2005, 07:04 AM
ok so now sharingan, u go

Sharingan
03-19-2005, 02:03 PM
alright cool, im assuming that that's my character in the 3rd panel there. I'll probably do three pages, mind if i kick it up a notch?

mofo09
03-19-2005, 02:42 PM
yea kick it up, if your taking more than 3 days though tell us that your gonna need more time

Sharingan
03-20-2005, 04:14 PM
hmm yeah i think im gonna need more than 3, can i take a week?

mofo09
03-20-2005, 05:44 PM
yea sure

makogen
03-21-2005, 09:09 AM
SWEEEET HWOAA!
i like it. :D, I can't wait to go...>D

altrodesi
03-25-2005, 11:03 PM
hey how bout using some perspective skills to make the page more a live :)

mofo09
03-26-2005, 06:54 AM
perspective? whats that?

Sharingan
03-26-2005, 01:27 PM
uh i lost the roughs to the last couple pages so its gonna take maybe 2 days longer than i thought. sry..

mofo09
03-26-2005, 01:50 PM
haha ok

mofo09
03-29-2005, 04:57 AM
whats the progress on those pages?

Sharingan
03-29-2005, 07:31 AM
almost done, i swear it'll be worth the wait.

makogen
03-29-2005, 11:19 AM
c'mon c'mon---my hands are itching-----------------------------.!!!!___!!O@Oj/k man take your time

Samba
03-29-2005, 01:44 PM
so come on weres da fight iv been reading for a cpouple of days noe plz plz plz plz finish i cant wait either!?!?!??!?!?!?

Samba

mofo09
03-29-2005, 01:48 PM
well sharingan is almost done i guess, and it should be "worth the wait"

Sharingan
03-31-2005, 11:37 AM
all uh...*counts pages* 9 of my roughs are done. I just need to clean them up and put lettering in them. Hang in there for just a couple more days guys...

mofo09
03-31-2005, 12:54 PM
ho sweet, 9 pages! we're in for a treat here guys lol

Sharingan
04-04-2005, 08:02 AM
cleaning up is taking longer than expected so, to kill some of the suspense, i'll be posting my pages as im finishing them. Expect the first 2 tonight.

mofo09
04-04-2005, 08:03 AM
k cool

makogen
04-06-2005, 09:00 AM
-_-''

Ninken
04-06-2005, 11:09 AM
--= ) (i have a fork i my head smiley)

mofo09
04-06-2005, 04:30 PM
were is this kid

makogen
04-07-2005, 10:28 AM
I'm dying...x_X

mofo09
04-07-2005, 11:36 AM
oookayy time to enforce the 3 day rule!! dude if you got it done then post something! like one page at least!

Sharingan
04-07-2005, 12:37 PM
sry guys....my comp broke so i haven't had it for about 4 days now and am using a school comp now. However, i am getting it back this weekend so plz wait just a teeny bit more. plzplzplz. here's pg 1 by the way. sry for the mess..(no ps on these damn school comps)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v645/animecrzi/mizuhapg1.jpg

uh....more to come.

mofo09
04-07-2005, 01:16 PM
ok coo

Ninken
04-10-2005, 04:33 AM
Really nice.. now work FASTER

mofo09
04-11-2005, 05:12 AM
post another page dude

makogen
04-14-2005, 09:46 AM
-_-''

Sharingan
04-15-2005, 11:01 AM
um. i had no idea, but my teachers informed me a couple days ago that AP's are in two weeks. And since im taking like 4 ap classes...yeah, i have to drop out or my future is screwed. So unless u guys can postpone the fight, im regretfully going to have to drop this one..

mofo09
04-15-2005, 11:19 AM
geesh.. u made us wait so long... ninkin i think u should go since your fast about the pages

makogen
04-15-2005, 10:51 PM
isn't it my turn.?
I'll be quick, i'll post on monday morning PROMISE!!
..it's just that I've been thinking about this fight a lot...
I promise to have a page up by monday, and finish on wednesday at the latest...

mofo09
04-16-2005, 06:42 AM
ok go makogen

Ninken
04-16-2005, 10:26 AM
hehe mofo taken 'em to the limit

mofo09
04-16-2005, 11:21 AM
*whip sound*

makogen
04-19-2005, 11:44 PM
Ok I'm staying up late to finish the roughs I've been working on... I'll have the first page up tomorrow morning. shouldn't be too much more tho...they're pretty sweet.

makogen
04-20-2005, 02:37 PM
here's page 1

I've got a few more that I'll finish tonight and tomorrow...this was rushed....sorryhttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v736/makogen/vssouren.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v736/makogen/vssouren.gif

makogen
04-21-2005, 10:48 PM
next page will be up tomorrow afternoon.

mofo09
04-22-2005, 05:00 AM
ok

makogen
04-24-2005, 11:02 PM
man, I'm sorry, but don't worry, tomorrow morning I'll have the next page up, I missed school on friday and it threw me off. I'll be checking in extra early to apply the PS effects and line ups, and I'm going to re-submit the first page...I hate the way I cut it up...another failed experiment. The re-cut first and second page tomorrow before 12:00

makogen
04-25-2005, 11:56 AM
ok you guys...I've scanned the page 2...I'll post it, however I'm not very happy with it...so I'll repost the update on weds...here it is... and the pg1 update will be done on wedsday as well...pg3 is on its way, give me until thursday before kicking me please.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v736/makogen/mizuhapg.gif

mofo09
04-25-2005, 01:01 PM
okie dokie

makogen
04-27-2005, 10:30 PM
...Hey guys, I'm sorry, I won't be able to finish the fight...life sucks.
I will be posting the updates of the two complete pages though...

Sagaseeds
05-07-2005, 11:27 PM
So who's after Makogen?

mofo09
05-08-2005, 07:32 AM
wow your still here? well do you wanna go?

Sagaseeds
05-09-2005, 01:49 AM
Yeah, still around. ^^;;;; I don't mind going- that is, if Makogen doesn't mind me messing around with what his character's supposed to do...

mofo09
05-09-2005, 06:58 AM
ok then... just go