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mofo09
03-14-2005, 07:30 PM
the great rush!! from the fc...but it died! so imma do it by myself, make a comic, and take all the credit! BWHAHAHAHA

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IMPORTANT!!!
im out of space on tripod to host images! aahh! i need either a new site or someone that will host my site on their server or something. sooo one or the other. if you know a free site then please give me a link please

*update*
the last update took me 3 months to do... this update took me 5... oh well! you got three pages this time!

my comic is now up on a comic website www.onlinecomics.net

i also dont know how to get rid of that poll... if anyone can help me that'd be cool

DN
03-14-2005, 08:43 PM
If this was a fight club and there was another person's character that you're using, you should probably ask for permission. I didn't really see anyone else though since this one looked like setup for something later, so maybe you were going to do something else. Just something to keep in mind since it seems fine to me to continue dead fight clubs here, so long as the other participants agree beforehand.

Anyway, I would like to see the pages cleaned up (coming from someone who's messy all the time :p). The text was practically unreadable at points too, so it would be nice if you took it into photoshop or something and did the text digitally with some text bubbles and stuff. I liked the fact that you were changing the angles alot (especially page 2), but maybe you could try some other panel layouts and change it up a bit more to make things even more interesting.

mofo09
03-14-2005, 08:51 PM
the fight was basically you make your own comic, then we join them at the end, but everyone quit, and i liked where i was goin with it and decided beforehand if everyone were to quit id keep making it and turn it into a comic of its own.

anyway, thanks for the crits, i was planning on using photoshop, but i got lazy...and i really need someone to tell me how to make a text bubble with good comic-y text in it, so if anyone has any tips on that it would be greatly appreciated.

DN
03-14-2005, 09:09 PM
http://www.makeshiftmiracle.com/TutWordB.html
http://www.figma.com/howto/psimmons/ps_lettering_01.htm

Or, you can just create a shape with the selection tool, fill it with a color, and then use "stroke" from the layer styles menu (at the bottom of the layers pallette. looks like an "f").

mofo09
03-15-2005, 05:19 AM
thanks

i love that this comic section is here now, i can post up my other comic too! which doesnt have a name! lol.... i need to start working on that one again and come up with a name so you guys can see it

Manga Sims
03-16-2005, 09:35 AM
Great stuff MOFO!

Too bad that fight club was a dud.....

Mine went 11 mil (million) Your sh*t went DUB!- 50 cents

mofo09
03-16-2005, 11:45 AM
...wat does that mean...


new pages comming soon!!!

Manga Sims
03-17-2005, 07:27 AM
It means nothing...I just type stupid things (like quoting 50 cents) That dude is dumb!

I cant wait for the new pages!

mofo09
03-17-2005, 12:49 PM
haha 50 cent is comming out with a new game!

vincent316
04-04-2005, 05:46 AM
Mofo...done with that new paage? Come on..pweez? MOFO...MOFO...MOFO!!!!!! WOO WOO WOO WOO

mofo09
04-04-2005, 07:40 AM
haha, yea... i didnt think i had any fans so i wasnt really in a hurry.. but ill put it up for you vincent!

AZmayu
04-04-2005, 09:38 AM
great stuff mofo, next time just make the words a little bit bigger when you write em so when u scan and resize em the letters will still be readable...but other than that great stuff...

mofo09
04-04-2005, 12:31 PM
yea im changing the text right now actually, so they should all be in text soon!!!

mofo09
04-04-2005, 02:30 PM
dag i need to change some of these dialog... a few lines are really gay

ben2theedge
04-04-2005, 10:06 PM
Good artwork! Would look even better inked, though. And get yourself a good manga/comic book font (http://www.blambot.com) - the one you're using looks kinda unprofessional.

mofo09
04-05-2005, 02:27 PM
how do i get the font on my photoshop?

AZmayu
04-05-2005, 02:51 PM
go to MyComputer/Windows/Fonts......make sure you quit Photoshop first and then load the fonts in the Font folder.... when you open Photoshop it should be there automatically

mofo09
04-05-2005, 03:39 PM
sweet, thanks

mofo09
04-15-2005, 07:07 PM
update! 2 new pages!

mofo09
04-26-2005, 07:57 AM
sorry to my fans ( ...if i have any at all...) ive got 3 new pages scanned already, but i just need to find time to text em up and stuff.

Paper
04-26-2005, 05:34 PM
its kool ( yes I am a fam of yours) ill wait to c what u come up with .

mofo09
04-26-2005, 05:38 PM
wow i have a fan

mofo09
05-01-2005, 09:29 AM
update

Hood-Ninja
05-02-2005, 06:37 PM
woah. this is good stuff!!

vincent316
05-05-2005, 01:44 AM
yay!!! New pages...Man, noone has critted on this. I am not good enough to crit on this one thing I gotta say is that in the last page u forgot to color one of the robbers mask. Oh and I dont understand very well what is happening in the last pages. I am just dumb I guess...

Saturn
05-05-2005, 02:38 AM
Oh very nice, good story.

mofo09
05-05-2005, 04:41 AM
oh thank you all so much!
whats happening in the last pages is that the cop got shot by the terrorist

vincent316
05-05-2005, 05:56 AM
ahahah i guess i knew THAT. But what confused me was "you traitor" etc etc

mofo09
05-05-2005, 10:58 AM
oh.. well youll find out why later

ps im currenty working on the new pages

vincent316
05-07-2005, 01:25 AM
Don't like the name...please dont change it..or maybe change it to a different name.

mofo09
05-07-2005, 06:09 AM
lol yea dont worry, it seems no one likes the name... but the thing is, i need a name cause i wanna make a website, and i cant make the website without a name

Phunin
05-07-2005, 07:04 AM
Hmmm.....website? If you need help with the website tell me cause your comic is hot and I wanna see more of it. I can get someone to make a website layout for you and all of that. So if you need help just pm me.

mofo09
05-14-2005, 03:43 PM
update

KempoKatt
05-15-2005, 04:56 AM
Hey Mofo09, thanks for the nod :) I'm just a fan like everyone else...the new pages are friggin' awesome!!! keep it up!

mofo09
06-02-2005, 01:43 PM
sorry for the delay guys... ive been real busy lately... ill try to get them up soon.. like this weekend

mofo09
06-03-2005, 11:01 AM
update

crimsongod
06-04-2005, 11:29 AM
yo man i'm feeling da story cant wait 2 see more i'm a fan

mofo09
06-04-2005, 12:48 PM
o thanks man, i always love to see fans comment my stuff

mofo09
06-10-2005, 03:55 PM
update

mofo09
06-21-2005, 01:56 PM
update

Sideburnz
06-27-2005, 08:10 PM
This comic is awesome. I wish I could create art like that, but alas, I have the creatvity of a stump.

H4eafy
07-04-2005, 02:23 AM
In a drawing that is for art purposes only i like the sketched look.

But in a comic i like the clean look.

mofo09
07-13-2005, 07:18 PM
update FINALLY!!

mofo09
07-23-2005, 10:39 AM
update

Tsunami
07-24-2005, 01:48 PM
The discussion about pencil or ink style aside, what makes a good comic?
It's the storyline, the character design, the action...and I have to say that 'Honey' got all of that! Excellent work that shows a lot of thought went into it.

mofo09
07-24-2005, 03:50 PM
oh ya... a LOOOTT of thought lol :D

mofo09
07-29-2005, 03:14 PM
update

AZmayu
07-30-2005, 01:27 PM
great stuff mofo the new ones and all the screen tones. i love how you mess with angles and little area shots i dont know whats the term on those maybe fillers i don't know but good job..... be expecting more :)

mofo09
07-31-2005, 08:42 PM
the older pages im working on adding screentones and inking and stuff, so its all gonna be good and this way people wont look at the first page and be like EW what a horrible comic!

mofo09
09-25-2005, 08:59 PM
*hears crickets*
oooookkkk i know the comic sucks!!!
but im currently working on new pages.. ive been busy lately with some book thats gonna get published.. and that thing called school (yes i go to school, im not a robot.. even though i do seem like one *beep boop boop* *closes up the back of my head* ......). soooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!! yea im gettin into the groooove of my old style.. its lookin pretty good! theres a new chapter of blade of the immortal out which is a super duper awsome chapter might i add (also illegal)....(muahhaha) so thats given me a lot of inspiration for thingggsss cha knowww.. i think i have two pages so far actually.. lemme check... o0o0o yesssss two pages.. workin on my third! gotta ink it though! maybe i can get a guest inker for the next few pages lol *coughAzcough*... *coughAzpmmeifyouwannainkthenextfewpagesCOUGH!!!* ouch.. that one hurt my throat... *COUGHormangasimsCOUGH*.. maybe i should see a doctor... aaanyywayy, just thought i should keep all my fans posted (yes all 5 fans) aboot whats been goin on! and i think im done! im gnna sleep now! unless i suddenly think of something else to say!...NOPE! soo off i goo cyA'LL later .. GATORS!!! sadkh;asdjfha[oihkndc,anoi

Spider Edge
10-30-2005, 04:18 AM
Lol your comic seems highly motivated man, its great. I mean, a cop taking his daughter with him isn't the most logic but i know its all fun lol. I'm anxious to see whats next though.

mofo09
10-30-2005, 05:36 AM
well he was taking her to school!

Spider Edge
10-30-2005, 07:19 AM
Lol no i mean when he told her to get out and she convinced him to let her stay. Bad guys + driving in vans = they have big guns. You have to keep drawing it >_< i wanna see what happens in the rest of her flash back.

mofo09
10-30-2005, 12:02 PM
well... ill do it when im motivated enough.. i have like 3 pages though.. maybe i shoudl upload those

Lace
11-01-2005, 07:03 PM
very nice sketchy style i must say =D. im partially new so im not familiar with fight club. i forgot my old account so i made a new one after my long long time away from the internet. so ya ^_^;. good work nonetheless!

Spider Edge
11-06-2005, 03:24 PM
What were the other artist gonna do? Honey makes me wanna put something up.

mofo09
11-06-2005, 03:50 PM
what other artists

KuroNekoSama
11-06-2005, 04:03 PM
nnng nnng want more oO....... i wanna know what happened.... WHO DID SHE SHOOT!!!! *spazzes out*

mofo09
11-06-2005, 04:54 PM
bwhahahaha!! i love that.. makes me wanna draw more

Spider Edge
11-06-2005, 09:36 PM
Didn't you say this was gonna be a FC at first, where everyone makes a comic and then the characters meet up? For some reason every thing i come across lately, makes me think of crossover capabilities. The great rush is what i'm reffering to.

mofo09
11-07-2005, 04:32 AM
yes yes.. that was the initial plan. but everyone quit, and i really liked where my idea was going, so i made it into a comic.

unstable monki
11-08-2005, 03:51 PM
i like it...but just to go on record it's "fiddy cen"

some of your posts are freakin' me out. :p

mofo09
11-08-2005, 06:45 PM
Fiddy Cen Yeooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Freaky Deaky Peaky Yyyyeeeeeeooooooooo

Spider Edge
11-09-2005, 03:56 PM
hickory smoked da bacon with cheese shadidally didally?

mofo09
11-09-2005, 04:01 PM
Oui

mofo09
11-13-2005, 06:02 PM
ok update u guys

D4Shadow
12-06-2005, 04:20 PM
nice, It's look cooler if you had background, then again, background is hard with all that perspective ㅠ.ㅠ

Great stuff

I_M_God
04-11-2006, 04:06 AM
sammy* look mommy : a dead thread!

Mommy* no sammy...dont touch it... it mite have GERMS!!!

mofo09
04-12-2006, 04:13 PM
does that mean you like my comic?

Steasaurus
04-12-2006, 05:50 PM
any updates mofo? and you up at post 68, if you think it's dead don't dig it up :P

mofo09
04-12-2006, 09:09 PM
wellllllllllllllll i have some pages, but i dont think anyone is interested anymoreee... ill still eventually finish this, lets say its a life goal of mine. maybe when i become better at drawing

Steasaurus
04-13-2006, 06:07 AM
that's a shame... it's a long way until you get better :P
hehe you know I'm just jesting... :eek2: or am I?
Seriously just work on it more. If you're really sure your skills aren't worthy of your ideas yet then just try redrawing the other pages until you find your confidence ;) I'm not saying they need improving but it would be a good exercise.

mofo09
04-13-2006, 12:34 PM
yea true dat... but heres the thing fifty... im lazy..

I_M_God
04-13-2006, 01:16 PM
*dig dig dig*

hell yes it does

*dig dig dig*

comon bayby! you just gotta live!! i dont no wut ill do w/o you!

gold_tangerine
05-29-2006, 06:52 PM
You're an annoying guy mofo but your comic is nice, I'll pass out if I read all of it (or my computer will, it's on battery power) but sometimes perfectly inked stuff pisses me off and so does screentone because I can't do it. People come in all tastes; you can make everyone look like a mushroom and somewhere you'll still have 5,000 fans. Well, that's what I hope. Because my stuff is too weird for me.

mofo09
05-30-2006, 11:25 AM
thanks guys...
tangerine - i wish my "fans" would let me know they like it though! cause without that i really dont feel like doing it...

i havent drawn in a while... or looked at this site in a while for that matter.. so maybe ill start on working on some new pages...

do you guys still like the screentoned style?

mofo09
05-30-2006, 11:27 AM
actually, as a matter of fact i think ill try out a new style that i did.. or maybe it was a dream......... but yea im gonna try to do that so hopefully you guys'll like it

aido179
05-30-2006, 02:34 PM
well the comic is definately worth working on. i think its great.

mofo09
05-30-2006, 03:33 PM
thanks, im thinking of the next few pages... they could be together this week!

I_M_God
07-17-2006, 05:48 PM
Yaay! New Pages!

TheKosmonaut
07-17-2006, 06:35 PM
thanks, im thinking of the next few pages... they could be together this week!
Shouldn't any pages after 30 be in the next issue? I liked the little cliffhanger at the end of 30.

mofo09
07-18-2006, 08:56 AM
i guess....

Steasaurus
07-19-2006, 06:26 AM
\o/ bring on the next issue!!!

mofo09
07-19-2006, 10:51 AM
lol im not working on it right now guys, i wanna get further in heatwave

Steasaurus
07-24-2006, 05:37 AM
Well yeah heatwave has more boobage... I was simply refering to the future or something.

mofo09
07-24-2006, 12:50 PM
shutup 5te!!!!