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Alfwok
04-22-2005, 10:58 PM
Sorry the picture is very bad looking, it's on a giant peice of paper so i just took a picture of it. Try to ignore all the unfinished still-life in the background and the flat blocked hands. I think i made her head too small torso too wide, boobs too big or arms too long. i must have made a sight measuring mistake in there somewhere. I need any tips i can get or a good draw over would be very helpful.

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davidshenoda
04-23-2005, 02:09 AM
Head seems a little too small maybe since its in background thats how it is supposed to be I'd have to see your reference. But shapes are looking good. Add some shadows and lighting to give it some real depth. Keep workin on it, and give a little more to comment on.

Twitch
04-23-2005, 06:12 AM
I agree with david on this one...keep working on it. Hokay

Alfwok
04-23-2005, 04:38 PM
ok i guess ill try and finish the shading and then look for problems while im doing that. I'd show you my refrence but taking pictures of the models is grounds for expusion lol.

johnfields
04-24-2005, 06:06 AM
Underlying forms seem off - torso is too big and not defined,left shoulder is larger than right clavicles are placed too high and not correct. These are small things, check out -
http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/0289800900/103-1524818-9031805?v=glance
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