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te shok
04-24-2005, 05:56 AM
I started drawing this tonight. Im not too sure about the chest stomache area and im just looking for a third opinion. Sorry about the quality done it on blue paper coulding find any white :mad: anywho couldint resist had to practice some coloring and it came out crap :ugh:
http://img126.echo.cx/img126/6596/swordswomancopy1ec.jpg

OniCloud
04-24-2005, 07:16 AM
ok, first off the right arm looks wrong, cause I just tried holding something like that but to do that I'd have to pop my shoulder out of place so change the position of that arm. The fingers grabing her wrists are too spread out and make the hand seem too small for them. Her hips are too big and her waist seemds kind of skinny. re-work the crotch and the boots look very odd to me :X. So get to work :S

er about the right arm I can't tell what her hand position is so that's why it's bugging me is it facing up, down, towards us? please tell :3

Evil Iori
04-24-2005, 07:44 AM
I think you should get your proportions down properly before you begin to colour. I don't know how much this will help you but i did a quick paintover expaining some problems in the anatomy.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v405/vip3r69/teshokpaintover.jpg

Krieock
04-24-2005, 10:24 AM
way to go Iori, that looks like you covered all the probs.
Just keep working on it Shok, and I know this is over worked (b/c it's not heeded enough) but study anatomy! Study real anatomy - don't just look at hentai for hours on end (that's not called studying... that's something else -.-) http://www.simplenudes.com is a good site for nude anatomical links + a small gallery. I like the links Simple Nudes has b/c they don't have too much obviously erotic photoes (go somewhere else for those... like picsmonster... but don't tell anyone i said that >.<).

Djinn
04-24-2005, 11:21 AM
Also, the posture of the picture looks rather off - particularly the placement of the feet. Maybe rethink that?

For the placement of the navel, generally all you have to do is draw a straight line from the sternum to the groin and the bellybutton should be somewhere along that line. It seems as if the stomach on this character is rotated a bit off.

Ger right shoulder looks as if it is dislocated as well. Rethink the shoulder area. Other than that, good job. I like it. Good character design.

OniCloud
04-24-2005, 11:30 AM
way to go Iori, that looks like you covered all the probs.
Just keep working on it Shok, and I know this is over worked (b/c it's not heeded enough) but study anatomy! Study real anatomy - don't just look at hentai for hours on end (that's not called studying... that's something else -.-) http://www.simplenudes.com (http://www.simplenudes.com/) is a good site for nude anatomical links + a small gallery. I like the links Simple Nudes has b/c they don't have too much obviously erotic photoes (go somewhere else for those... like picsmonster... but don't tell anyone i said that >.<).

But that's what I study ;-; lol j/k

The only things that bug me know is lack of detail :/

te shok
04-25-2005, 04:34 PM
better? ignore the hand i forgot about it. dont worry abut the coloring i dont mind redoing it gives me more practice.
http://img224.echo.cx/img224/9173/swordswomancopy8oh.jpg

Sparet odinman
04-25-2005, 05:51 PM
its better with the changes, but i still think its needs more work. for example the feet, and pelvis. But over all good job, nice. i like it and it will be better when its done.