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McGarnacle
04-26-2005, 04:12 AM
Umm... so I havn't posted here since my first which was about two months ago... I've had an 'artists block' as people call it and this is the first serious drawing I've done in a while.

So I decided to draw a woman in a different pose than I usually do....

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/bbbbb/scan0002.jpg

then I drew over it with pencil and added a bit of clothing, not finished with that yet... the problem is she seemed to lose the look af before when she had no details drawn in... any crits/advice that someone can help me with to improve the drawing? I'm worried about how her foot is drawn in the second one too... oh and I havn't done her other leg yet :( will be harder with clothes over it... her right(our left)foot seems to be on a wrong angle to me aswell on the second one...

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/bbbbb/scan0003.jpg

TheSorrow
04-26-2005, 04:47 AM
Hello McGarnacle,i'm a new member here.You drawing is good,but only minor anatomy problem.hmmm lets see( i can be wrong though sometimes):

First pic:
-her neck is abit long.
-i think her pelvis is abit small.
Second pic:
-Her hand looks odd and small.
-i think her pelvis looks small
-her right elbow(left elbow at front view)doesn't look right.please fix it.

other than that. looks perfect!:unibrow:
cheers and keep practicing.

TheSorrow

McGarnacle
04-26-2005, 10:01 PM
Anything else by anyone...? it's not that good i'm sure you can find more things wrong that i cant..

Battousai
04-27-2005, 07:17 AM
her shoulders look a tad broad...just alittle. be nice if you completely finished it but oh well. her hair took and gave her a new image. you changed her eyed and mouth it looks like in the semi-finished version to me. did ya? good pic though.

wohoo19m
04-27-2005, 12:35 PM
ya the elbow on the left ( our right ) is on the wrong side. Other than that it's looking good.

Krieock
04-27-2005, 01:09 PM
I saw a couple little spots, similar to the ones above. But I thought this looked phenominal - you sue the same tech I do :) cheers!

my third drawover in the last 20 mins -.- I'm sick...
http://img42.echo.cx/img42/6564/scan0002copy8ba.jpg

SaschaJ
04-27-2005, 01:45 PM
Her pelvis area is REALLY high!
How in all the world could this woman have a baby!!

--even if she's one of those one-night-stand super fighter chick!-- o.O

McGarnacle
04-27-2005, 10:27 PM
Thanks for the crits everyone I'll work on finishing it.. and she's not planning to have a kid :P

Sparet odinman
04-27-2005, 10:33 PM
not bad... showing progress... she looks better with the clothes.

krieock did a good draw over he pointed most the things i noticed.
good job to you and keep parciticing.
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