View Full Version : Two drawings(after weeks of practice)

04-28-2005, 03:00 PM
I decided to put my new skill to use. It's noting cool or anything just practice work. There's probably a lot of mistakes here.
http://tinypic.com/4rfhpe (http://tinypic.com/view.html?pic=4rfhpf)
http://tinypic.com/4rfic1 (http://tinypic.com/view.html?pic=4rfic2)

04-28-2005, 03:33 PM
Good stuff, It just seems your shoulder muscles dont fit right with the biceps. The shoulder muscles attach on the outside of the arm, and the bicep goes under the chest muscles. I dont know if that made any sense but if you want I'll do a draw over to show you. Let me know.

04-28-2005, 07:06 PM
I understand what you're saying, I just need to continue my studies in drawing a muscular anatomy. Your previous work is an good example of what your speaking of, so I'll use that as an aid.

04-28-2005, 08:12 PM
whoooa that's really NIICE!!! :D

04-30-2005, 01:04 PM
Nice drawings. In the second drawing, the upper arm on the right has a smaller width than the left.

Non Existent IBW
04-30-2005, 01:23 PM
you need more varying line weights it looks so monotone right now. Almost coloring book like. Make one light source, thicken all the lines away from it.

05-01-2005, 11:27 AM
cool drawings, but the second one looks like hes about to fall backwords...I would move one of his feet slightly back to look like hes balancing more properly

the shining
05-01-2005, 11:33 AM
not bad. maybe a little more expression on the first ones face.

05-01-2005, 04:00 PM
Like I said before, there's a lot of mistakes in these pictures of mine. The critz have been great, understandable, and helpful. There's no need for me to make excuses about the pictures, what I drew is what I drew and that's finale. Critz are the road to success and it will not be easy for any of us. Keep them coming.

Manga Sims
05-02-2005, 04:36 AM

The hands on the second one are...a bit off. The arms seem a bit...not the same. On is larger than the other.

The forhead for the first one is big.

Thats bout it. I'll show you the rest later. :) (tommorrow hopefully)

05-02-2005, 09:50 AM
Great crit, I'll be more accurate next time and I'll work on the lighting and shading, because does look a littel off.

05-02-2005, 11:57 AM
Minus a couple of issues (already raised above - and which I'm sure will improve with practice), looks good. I like the attention to detail paid to the clothing, I always have trouble coming up with good costumes myself.