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LLPerks
04-29-2005, 03:29 PM
http://photos1.blogger.com/img/282/5468/640/IAInk.jpg

Please feel free to tell me what you think. I know some of the words might be hard to read, something happened in the process of scanning. If you can read it, great! Tell me what you think.

mofo09
04-29-2005, 05:02 PM
this place is to post comic/manga... you should post the whole thing

LLPerks
04-30-2005, 12:05 AM
I thought what I posted was a comic. I also said that it was one of the things I was working on and I just wanted a few comments, thats all. I'm not sure what the future for this is. I'm thinking ongoing web comic, right now.

emmapeel
04-30-2005, 06:54 AM
Perks, it looks pretty cool. it is a little confusing (and the info at the very top of the page seems to indicate it comes in the middle of a story.) that makes the "Few things scare me. Oh, God!" bit seem rather abrupt and perhaps even random.

i like the inking although i think you could probably thicken up the blacks in a couple places. particularly in the first frame. it seems that if there's that dark of a shadow on his torso that there would be a little more shadow on the side of his arm against the door (instead of just the thin contour line that's there now.)

anyway, it looks interesting. can't wait to see more. :)

e.p.