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Spike32
05-01-2005, 11:21 AM
http://www.freewebs.com/spike32/yuukan223-medium.jpghttp://www.freewebs.com/spike32/yuukan223-medium.jpgther is probably a lot wrong with this pic but that why putting here so please help me.

Click (http://www.freewebs.com/spike32/yuukan223-medium.jpg)

Cian
05-01-2005, 11:42 AM
Your link comes straight back to this thread. Am I the only one experiencing this.

Spike32
05-01-2005, 11:57 AM
http://www.freewebs.com/spike32/yuukan223-medium-small.jpgsomeone tell me if it showed up please
click (http://www.freewebs.com/spike32/sketches.htm)

hezzart
05-01-2005, 12:28 PM
all i can see wrong is the shrunken upperbody. it should be longer. and theres no proof of a hand being in the jacket-pockets. So if you could somehow extend the upperbody (the easiest way would probably erasing the lowerbody and extending) and make it more evident that there's a hand in his pocket it would be fine. the head is good.

edit: i dont often do draw overs to help fellow users out, but im willing to help you with this one, since the head is good and the design is good aswell.

anyway, this is what i was ranting about.
http://img67.echo.cx/img67/8868/yuukan223medium5eh.jpg
*i just noticed that i drew him in a wrong angle, doh!*

gmpilot
05-01-2005, 12:59 PM
When the link comes back to the thread, drag and drop into the url bar.

Spike32
05-01-2005, 01:27 PM
thank you i will change it

chain2treechick
05-01-2005, 07:01 PM
the tombstones are kinda bendy.
;P

OniCloud
05-01-2005, 07:15 PM
Yeah the tombstones need work, shouldn't be all bubbly lookin. Also not all tomb stones always have R.I.P. on them.

Spike32
05-04-2005, 07:07 PM
thanks