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Onwakariudo
05-01-2005, 01:33 PM
http://img127.echo.cx/img127/4825/10101ie.th.jpg (http://img127.echo.cx/my.php?image=10101ie.jpg)

making sure the anatomy and perspective look ok before i go on with the costume, also if anyone has any costume suggestions and face suggestions (cuz im not good with making up faces) feel free to comment.
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just noticed the squareness of the boobs... i'll have to make those more round.

cyprox
05-01-2005, 02:35 PM
I think the legs are to wide, that is if it's not a foreshortening thing. Its hard to see without clothes.

hezzart
05-01-2005, 02:42 PM
looking like a hentai scene ^_^"

Krieock
05-01-2005, 03:42 PM
looking like a hentai scene ^_^"
Cheers ^^

Onwakariudo
05-01-2005, 06:33 PM
i kept messing up and it got to sketchy, but ill post anyway.

http://img82.echo.cx/img82/9964/10119zc.th.jpg (http://img82.echo.cx/my.php?image=10119zc.jpg)

chain2treechick
05-01-2005, 06:40 PM
the legs still are awefully fat and the head seems kinda small. why so big a chin? i think you could maybe move the face down a bit.

eightate8
05-01-2005, 06:48 PM
Big chin yeah and the legs are so weird! Starting at the knee the bottom line (the the inside line) tend to start sort of straight and then flare out towards the butt. Yours have some odd lumpiness. But probably the biggest problem I think is just the whole pose, what is she doing? I can't imagine her doing anything other than dancing a little jig.

Onwakariudo
05-01-2005, 07:33 PM
gah, i know all that, i completely screwed it up, and she's supposed to have half her butt on a stone of some kind, its weird... i need to do some leg, and face/head anatomy studies, i think i've got most of the upper body down...now i need to practice legs and heads. thanks for your crits anyway i appreciate it.

OniCloud
05-01-2005, 07:40 PM
yes her thighs are too fat and too spread out. Also her right hand's fingers seem to be gripping it odd, the fingers look too slanted. And I think her waist should be bent a little because it looks more like she's standing up then sitting on a stone or something like you said you wanted her to be.