UPDATE- naruto

[oocolaoo]

arHello everyone, I re did some of the lines for this pic. I changed his face around to make him look younger. I made more variation with the lines and tried to make them less straight. I also fixed his mouth and right arm. Let me know if theres nething else thanks.



new
http://img239.echo.cx/img239/7408/nuratovector3young7zs.th.jpg (http://img239.echo.cx/my.php?image=nuratovector3young7zs.jpg)http://img124.echo.cx/img124/7893/n43ac.th.gif (http://img124.echo.cx/my.php?image=n43ac.gif)

old
http://img236.echo.cx/img236/2627/nuratovector2j7sv.th.jpg (http://img236.echo.cx/my.php?image=nuratovector2j7sv.jpg)

[Faliat]

Good for a first attempt at it... keep it up!

[FigureFour]

That's pretty good, but all your lines are so streight.
You need to throw in some more curves.

Those thick lines look great too, but you could use more variation. They can really add depth and weight to a piece of line art, but too many of them are thin.

[Eiyuu_Kou]

I like et.

[oocolaoo]

hey, thanks guys,
Figure Four, I agree i need to add more variation with line width, and also that its theres to man straight lines and not curved onse, i was using cs and i guess i got lazy, i didnt know it was that noticble. Ill go back and fix those problems. Thanks guys

[Battousai]

eh...good job but i noticed some of your lines ran into each other.

[Dragon_Head]

A most excellent "first attempt".... bah i wish my first attempts were this clean...
well anways everything is stiff.. like FF said, but most especially his mouth, its a near hexagon. Other than that his thump is a bit lumpy.

[AZmayu]

not bad for first attempt it's way better than my first attempt of Naruto mine was stick figure Naruto... i think i got the bandana good :)