View Full Version : Am i improving?( now with more bum :) )

te shok
05-04-2005, 03:59 AM
ive been trying to touch up my anatomy latley the results arnt horrable but there meh.
new (tonight) the face looks manly to me not sure why and the legs are questionable
nah your not being rude or ofensive iori really helpfull tho
i just take time to drop ad habbits and pick up good ones.
Anywho i added a bum, shortened arm, changed hair, and had a go at fixing hand but its still funky.
Doh fogot to edit the cropping my scanner does so ive lost a few fingers

Evil Iori
05-04-2005, 04:16 AM
I consistently see the legs drawn too short. There is issues with her head, her chin is a bit blocky and she needs some more mass at the back of her head. The hair is awkward, i'm not sure what is going on.
Her right arm is way too long, her elbow should only reach around naval and her hand fully extended downwards should reach mid thigh. Her upper left hand is more in proportion but her lower left arm is way too long.
I suggest you move her hips up to lengthen her legs. You might want to widen her hips and (give her some ass).
She also doesn't seem to be holding the weapon. The hands also need some work. After many paintovers i've done for you, you still seem to miss my point, you need to have many curves on the female form. Study real people, study anatomy even. That's a good way to beable to draw them properly.
I hope this has helped you and please don't take any offence if I seem rude.
There is definately improvement on the old drawing in some aspects, but I believe the old picture has a more well proportioned body (height wise and limb wise)
Keep practising.

05-04-2005, 07:13 AM
yeah...he said most of it...you are improving though.

te shok
05-05-2005, 03:11 AM
Im quite happy with this tho the face is still annoying me can anyone help me on that
ive choses Black or very Dark Blue with a Dark Red trim could anyone suggest a good hair color to compliment those thanks in advance

05-05-2005, 03:20 AM
she looks like shes slightly off balance...

05-05-2005, 03:31 AM
Nice drawing there, only few problems:-

-her right upper arm is longer than her upper left arm.
-She looks unbalance just like j0n said
-her neck looks abit thick
-her lower right leg looks bend.
Other than that its okay.Perhaps that you need some practices and use reference to help you.