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j0n
05-04-2005, 11:15 PM
Here are some character sketches, some loosely based on chars from naruto..... benn reading a lot of the manga lately. (ps: if anyone wants a specific chapter or volume id be happy to email it to them , just pm me, i have up to chapter 238):

anyway, the sketches:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v722/phazon1234567/Kisame.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v722/phazon1234567/dosu.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v722/phazon1234567/zabuza.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v722/phazon1234567/scandunno6.jpg

and some practice hand sketches:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v722/phazon1234567/hands.jpg

j0n
05-05-2005, 03:37 AM
please crit..... i need them...... *dies*

pofo
05-05-2005, 03:52 AM
It's the slow time of the day, wait 'til America wakes up.
First guy has some strange crack pattern around the bridge of his nose, small eyes and no ears. Second guy's ear is very small and very high.
Like the second one best since it's got a bit of body attached to it.

Fishlike Samurai
05-05-2005, 04:07 AM
With the first one the weird face is part of the character as it is a sort of shark-person......well except for the fact that he has no ears that is. And he had stripes on his cheeks I believe.


Who needs downloading, power to the manga ;)

*edit*
Sorry but the eye of the sound guy (2nd person) looks a bit gay-ish :P Oh and who's the last character? And what happened to the village symbols on their head protectors? Zabuza and sound guy look very realistic!

j0n
05-05-2005, 04:36 AM
yeah kisame,i thought he was a shark too, dosu, yeah it does look a bit gay, and obviously Zabuza, i dunno who the last guy is i just made him up.

Fishlike Samurai
05-05-2005, 04:38 AM
Fine with me. You know somehow I get the feeling a Sasuke or an Itachi is missing, it seems as if always with Naruto fanart that if it's not Naruto then it includes a sharingan user. But that's not really neccesary, actually I'm kind of glad with the change.

j0n
05-05-2005, 04:48 AM
They werent meant to be exactly naruto chars, there are small differences, i will try an uchiha char!

eightate8
05-05-2005, 06:36 AM
Man I don't know what you guys are talking about. Jon your sig is rife with spelling errors, not that you typed it but seriously. Yeah so I'd only suggest that you not try to make your lines with one stroke, sketch it in lightly and then a bit darker and finally if it is all right finish the line. I know this means basically drawing each picture twice or three times but hey practice makes progress right.

tiyo konching
05-05-2005, 07:44 AM
er.. think its cool but you nid to shrink it

raptor
05-05-2005, 09:06 AM
i think u should make your own poses for them instead of takin them from the book....

j0n
05-05-2005, 12:31 PM
the ony one i took from the manga was zabuza...

Fishlike Samurai
05-05-2005, 12:38 PM
Though Dozu looks more like the one in the manga.