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Oddnez
05-05-2005, 03:05 PM
sorry, no boobies.
I haven't drawn in months! but I wanted to pick it up again..and well let's just say I very much dislike the arms, the hairstyle, the face and I don't know how to draw shoes!! craziness
help much appreciated :)

http://pictures.greatestjournal.com/userimg/3937127/766969

I don't want to draw hands..yet

FigureFour
05-05-2005, 03:14 PM
Actually, I kinda like it. Even without boobs.

You could try adding a bit more poof to the back of her head and thickening up her arms a bit. Maybe lengthen them too.

madamos
05-05-2005, 03:30 PM
Hi, my first post. Don't beat up on me too much :-)

I'd agree that the arms seem a little short. Apart from that can't wait to see it inked if you take it that far.

BTW, boobies aren't needed to make it look good. Sometimes it takes more effort to draw it without them.

Edit- the face isn't bad. Though even with the hair in that position you'll need the other eye. I keep catching myself trying to hide bodyparts.

the shining
05-05-2005, 03:39 PM
I don't know what your talking about the face is great. the hairs good. the arms are sort of weird but not too much. and as for the feet. **** shoes. I cant draw them either so. Great job.

akical
05-05-2005, 04:14 PM
lol .. i remember u from the old boards .. but i don't kno y ...


not bad drawing, crits: .. the neck cud use some fixing, as well (gimme 5 for a paintover) .. brb

http://www.pathcom.com/~olivia/oddnezedit.jpg

Krieock
05-05-2005, 04:24 PM
Add some hands, a bit more ass and you have a very good drawing.
Cheers

Oddnez
05-05-2005, 04:46 PM
haha yay thanks for all the help :D
i'll update again after I fix it up.

krieock, yeah, I thought the butt was too small, too.

*edit* omgosh i didn't realize...HI FF :DDDDD i still lorve you.

Oddnez
05-05-2005, 06:46 PM
update :DDD

uhg, i just realized her butt is still small..and the arms aren't any longer than before :confused: heehee shoes are a bit odd.

http://pictures.greatestjournal.com/userimg/3938991/766969

Meringue
05-05-2005, 06:52 PM
the shoes and legs look GREAT to me..see? you shouldn't be so scared of drawing shoes. plus, if you never draw the things you're afraid to draw, you'll never learn to do it better, and you'll never encourage yourself to move on ^^ For the hands, try and define the fingers so we know what the hands are grabbing and stuff like that.. It would be awesome to see this picture colored in the future.. I can already see the colors.. -daydreams-

akical
05-05-2005, 07:48 PM
make the forearm a tad longer .. and the upper arm smaller .. so shorter , but just as thick

lol .. loved comboy bebop

Pizzaman
05-08-2005, 11:42 PM
Hey look its Oddnez. That wacky girl from the old boards. Ya!

-Pizzaman