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tiyo konching
05-07-2005, 08:12 AM
neways this is my recent drawing fill free welcome all crits thank you very much!!!:D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v652/ipis/ref.jpg

Fishlike Samurai
05-07-2005, 08:15 AM
Cool! But I think the pants go a bit too high. Could be me though.

TheSorrow
05-07-2005, 08:16 AM
Verryyyyy niceeeee drawinggggg thereeeeee. It looks like that he's left hand is smaller than his right hand. Nice drawing :D

tiyo konching
05-07-2005, 08:26 AM
Verryyyyy niceeeee drawinggggg thereeeeee. It looks like that he's left hand is smaller than his right hand. Nice drawing :DOH YEAH DIDN'T NOTICE THAT THANKS^^

bathala_rubbz
05-07-2005, 08:29 AM
It looks like that he's left hand is smaller than his right hand. Nice drawing :D

i think it just looks fine...i think the folds needs to be attended. the choker(?) on his neck could be choking the character or maybe it's just meh.^^

NIICE work! ASTIIG pare! basta PINOY!!!

keep it up! meh look 4ward to yor improvemnts.

gmpilot
05-07-2005, 10:17 AM
I think on his right hand (apparent bigger one) the issue is that you made the fingers too thin and small for the rest of the hand. Proportion wise, that is. Maybe shrink the palm a little bit since a lot of the palm is covered by the fingers when a fist is made.

XeRaN
05-07-2005, 10:29 AM
Nice job! The highlights on the hair look really good. Really reminds me of the style in Basilisk Kouga NIpou Chou. (Professional anime by Gonzo studios) might want to darken the colors a little bit, seems kinda washed out. Keep up the good work man.
-X

bathala_rubbz
05-07-2005, 10:51 AM
Verryyyyy niceeeee drawinggggg thereeeeee. It looks like that he's left hand is smaller than his right hand. Nice drawing :D

ohh yeah...the left hand...arrkkkhhh...why didn't i noticed that earlier?! >.<

tiyo konching
05-08-2005, 07:36 AM
Nice job! The highlights on the hair look really good. Really reminds me of the style in Basilisk Kouga NIpou Chou. (Professional anime by Gonzo studios) might want to darken the colors a little bit, seems kinda washed out. Keep up the good work man.
-X thanks manhttp://polykarbonbbs.com/images/smilies/smile.gif nice animation you got therehttp://polykarbonbbs.com/images/smilies/biggrin.gif

tiyo konching
05-08-2005, 07:38 AM
ohh yeah...the left hand...arrkkkhhh...why didn't i noticed that earlier?! >.< oo nga chong parang may pagka abnoy 2loy yung gawa ko haha!!http://polykarbonbbs.com/images/smilies/biggrin.gifhttp://polykarbonbbs.com/images/smilies/laugh.gif

tiyo konching
05-08-2005, 07:39 AM
I think on his right hand (apparent bigger one) the issue is that you made the fingers too thin and small for the rest of the hand. Proportion wise, that is. Maybe shrink the palm a little bit since a lot of the palm is covered by the fingers when a fist is made. ei thanks for the advices i'll work on that^^

ceebee
05-09-2005, 06:43 AM
This is nice work here! I like the form and the proportions are pretty good. I don't mind the short torso and long legs, some people are built like that. There's only one thing I can think of and its the shirt. It's a neat idea, but it doesn't seem like it would be practical for ninjaing. Something that would be fitted I guess would be perfect but it seems that the way the fabric wraps around the shoulder would restrict the other (his right) arm too much. Like the hair, and the marks on his arms. They must be tattoos, nice work here!

tiyo konching
05-09-2005, 07:45 AM
This is nice work here! I like the form and the proportions are pretty good. I don't mind the short torso and long legs, some people are built like that. There's only one thing I can think of and its the shirt. It's a neat idea, but it doesn't seem like it would be practical for ninjaing. Something that would be fitted I guess would be perfect but it seems that the way the fabric wraps around the shoulder would restrict the other (his right) arm too much. Like the hair, and the marks on his arms. They must be tattoos, nice work here! ei thanks for the advice man,yeah think so the shirt should not be smoethin like this haha:D just tried a different idea

akaast
05-09-2005, 10:57 AM
proportions are a bit off .. his head is too big but now that it's done I don't need to crit

actually, I just wrote this to view my new avatar ^^

tiyo konching
05-10-2005, 06:58 AM
proportions are a bit off .. his head is too big but now that it's done I don't need to crit

actually, I just wrote this to view my new avatar ^^i think the hair made it look like he has a big head but i think its just fine:)

AZmayu
05-11-2005, 10:18 AM
pare galinggg, not bad not bad at all... i like the pose and the eye with the hair looks pretty good.... keep them comin tol...:)