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Papercut285
05-08-2005, 12:02 AM
The day before yesterday: Saga Shrildelvi
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/ceberus/SagaShrildelvi.jpg
CnC is highly appreciated. :D I hope y'all like it.

OniCloud
05-08-2005, 12:19 AM
The nose is off-center and the head looks too big. And I can't crit on whatever she's holding so yeah, draw some more of it ;p.


Um I'll try showing you what I think:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/OniCloud/aaaa.jpg
Hope this helps you :D

Brown Streak
05-08-2005, 06:09 PM
i think that the legs are too thick or the arms are too skinny overall it's good

Papercut285
05-08-2005, 08:01 PM
OniCloud absolutely cool draw over I'm so totally going to use it and yeah i'll also add some folds... althoug me and folds don't mix well. Yeah Brown Streak I guess the arms are a little bit too skinny... i'll flesh it out a bit more. About the glove... yeah it's supposed to be some sort of wireless computer and the thing hovering above her hand is a keyboard. I'm going to ad screens floating around her.

Papercut285
06-17-2006, 06:33 AM
LOL better super late than never eh. Anyway yeah so i redid this with the advice i got from way back then in mind :laugh: Man i'm running on dead batteries right now :D i'm so tired that i think i miss understood what Onicloud suggested and messed up her right shoulder altogether. Anyway I know whats wrong with it though so i'll try to fix it. It's making her look super stiff no?

And hopefully her legs arent too thick anymore and her arms aren't too skinny.

Didn't change much from the original though except maybe my style and the pose abit. CnC on this is totally welcomed and appreciated thanks :).

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/ceberus/ss_d.jpg

LOL I have no idea what "The day before yesterday" means I'm guessing that's what inspired this sketch :laugh: i don't know.

*Edit*

I was originally going to add lots of screens and such to this but maybe i'll end up adding only one or two screens now.

Krasterk
06-17-2006, 11:05 AM
Nice pose. Some of the folds, especially around the calves, look a bit unntural. Her legs seem to be spread a little, so maybe that page right thigh could be foreshortened some more ? I don't know. Except those details, it looks good !