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05-10-2005, 11:25 AM
I made these 2 sketches a couple days ago.
c&c might be appreciated...



05-10-2005, 11:29 AM
Very nice!
altough, they look a bit stiff

05-10-2005, 11:43 AM
first off, they're both pretty good ! :)

1st pic: her left foot looks like it may be twisted a little too far backward (?), and her arms look a little short

2nd pic: nice! her facial features may be a bit large for her head ... (?)

Good work though, keep it up.

05-10-2005, 11:51 AM
they both look good keep up the great work

05-10-2005, 12:56 PM
On the first one, the arms are too short. The wrist should hit near the crotch when the arm is relaxed like that. The head is also a bit too large, and elongated.

The second one's head is also too large but I rather like the shape. Her waist and hips are too thin to support her body, but I get the feeling I'm never going to get to you marvel-type fans ~_O

05-10-2005, 01:23 PM
very very clean and nice!!!!

the first pic the gun she is holding facing down is to short compared to the other gun she is holding down.

05-10-2005, 08:10 PM
good remark
I got what u mean it's a weight thing.
I'll fix it in my second sketch of this character.

Very nice!
altough, they look a bit stiff

05-10-2005, 08:26 PM
cedclark and twstdelf:
thanks for your comments! I'll appreciated that
I take good notice of what u've said and I'll fix in my second sketch...

I appreciate ya critic.
about the Marvel thing, well I want to experiment things with it. I used to draw animes type before but I'd also like to try once and while different type. Not to stick with one style for the rest of time if u know what i mean...

05-10-2005, 09:47 PM
nive one but her left leg[the 1st pic] bothers meh..i wonder..
the second one is reall GOOD!!