TheKosmonaut
08-14-2005, 06:10 PM
You're welcome to submit ideas for the name of this story. It's not at all near completion, as this will most likely be the beginning to a novel. From there I will most likely create a series of graphic novels derived from it. No they won't be under some major publisher, but they will all be right here in this forum for everyone to see. I hope you guys like my intro.
I had it hosted because I HATE not being able to indent (FYI you can't indent in alot of forums including pk). It reaaaally pissed me off, so here you go. Open it or save it, I don't care. Just promise me you'll try to read it to the end-it's only one page long. And please-NO STEALING. That would really hurt my trust in PK'ers if someone stole my intro to build on it.
(http://home.ripway.com/2005-8/383362/UnnamedOddyssey.wpd)http://host.picturewizard.com/2005-8/383362/UnnamedOddyssey.wpd
(http://host.picturewizard.com/2005-8/383362/UnnamedOddyssey.wpd)I know this piece doesn't give too much insight into the actual meat of the story, but to give you an idea, its' setting is in deserts of a barren planet, where an old man's adventurous past is played out. My inspiration came after watching trigun, but other than the setting, I promise to make the story as original as my creativity will allow.
A little peek into a hidden plot-driver in the story: sandstorm=change.
(http://host.picturewizard.com/2005-8/383362/UnnamedOddyssey.wpd)
I had it hosted because I HATE not being able to indent (FYI you can't indent in alot of forums including pk). It reaaaally pissed me off, so here you go. Open it or save it, I don't care. Just promise me you'll try to read it to the end-it's only one page long. And please-NO STEALING. That would really hurt my trust in PK'ers if someone stole my intro to build on it.
(http://home.ripway.com/2005-8/383362/UnnamedOddyssey.wpd)http://host.picturewizard.com/2005-8/383362/UnnamedOddyssey.wpd
(http://host.picturewizard.com/2005-8/383362/UnnamedOddyssey.wpd)I know this piece doesn't give too much insight into the actual meat of the story, but to give you an idea, its' setting is in deserts of a barren planet, where an old man's adventurous past is played out. My inspiration came after watching trigun, but other than the setting, I promise to make the story as original as my creativity will allow.
A little peek into a hidden plot-driver in the story: sandstorm=change.
(http://host.picturewizard.com/2005-8/383362/UnnamedOddyssey.wpd)