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Old 01-27-2007, 05:18 PM   #1
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Lineart Woman of the West

Fully inked... sorta messy looking. i'm having a little trouble with the shoulder. and i'm looking for someone who could color it. i'd be very grateful if you color it. ><


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Old 01-27-2007, 05:36 PM   #2
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I like it she is pretty. The dress is really nice. It might just be me but, I find it odd that she is missing a sniffer. I didn't know if that was what you were going for or you were going to add it considering this is a WIP thread.
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Old 01-27-2007, 05:44 PM   #3
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OMG her hat, her little hat! *squee*

Agree with the lack of sniffer - a little anime shadow would suffice Something pert

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Old 01-27-2007, 05:50 PM   #4
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omg... i just noticed i forgot her nose...
oops. um... hmmm....

wait
there she has a nose now
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Old 01-27-2007, 08:41 PM   #5
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Wow. I want her dress. It's really pretty, I have no real crits at all except that (and maybe this is just the way I'm seeing right now but....) it seems like you should be able to see more of the back to the shoe on our left. Other than that I have nothing. Beautiful work as usual!
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Old 01-27-2007, 10:06 PM   #6
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omg... i just noticed i forgot her nose...
oops. um... hmmm....

wait
there she has a nose now


It happens to all of us. One time I forgot to draw the whole head.

I love the detail you put into this. I also love your inking style. It reminds me of some old drawings out of maybe the 50/60s? Your style is so refreshing to see.

What always strikes me is how nice women draw female clothing compared to men. Guys seem to make stuff up or pick bad outfits.

Very nice!
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Old 01-28-2007, 12:50 AM   #7
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wow that dress is amazing! hehe...

ummm... for me my only crit is more personal preference... but i think her chin is a bit too pointed...

as i said... thats just personal preference really...
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Old 01-29-2007, 03:59 AM   #8
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Ill colour it, but it would be nice if you had a higher resolution version to colour...?
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Old 01-29-2007, 05:29 AM   #9
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Great style, and great dress, lots of details. Very elegant, i guess that's all i have to say =)
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Old 01-30-2007, 01:44 PM   #10
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thank you for comments!!!
Quixotica: is it okay if i just post it on the thread???

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Old 01-30-2007, 10:35 PM   #11
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I had a go havent done anything for ages
Edit: whops didn't see the boots.
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Old 01-31-2007, 02:19 AM   #12
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Nice shok, but you stole the dress colour i was gonna use.
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Old 01-31-2007, 03:16 AM   #13
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Looks good Shok you did justice to the line art. I like it. I was picturing a lighter color on the dress but that looks nice with that one.
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Wow... Looks real good. My only crit is that her dress is kinda sloppily drawn. The art stlye is really good, but I really color in a cel-shade sort of style.I'd like to color it but i'm not sure if it'd work with the picture.
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Fantastic. I'm a growing fan of your style Iv. And when I say growing I mean I liked it from the get go and more and more with every picture

I might try and colour this, but I'm out of practise and you wont be seeing it unless I'm happy with it

Am I right in saying she has about mid shin length boots on?
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Her neck looks way too long, and her head may be a little large, but it suits your style. Nice work :o
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Old 01-31-2007, 05:00 PM   #17
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te shok: WOW THAT'S AWSOME!! .. you missed the boot tho. but still. I LOVE IT! you know i was planning for a red dress.
Anikraze!: sorry about the dress. i'm not too... patient (?) with fluff and puff so i just scribble for a general shape.
m3_freak: i'd be happy if you colored it. thanks for the coms.. and yes, she does have shin-high boots on.
McGarnacle: T_T you're right. that's the part i was having trouble with. especially after i put her hair at her shoulder-- it makes her shoulder and neck look detached. i'd be happy if anyone could red-line that part.
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Old 01-31-2007, 06:53 PM   #18
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What always strikes me is how nice women draw female clothing compared to men. Guys seem to make stuff up or pick bad outfits.
We go by the "more is less" philosophy. Of course, unless we're talking about breasts.

And I agree, this picture is very nice and adorable. I think finesse is the appropiate word to describe the lineart. I look forward to more of your stuff. Mad props to te shok as well for the colors.
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Old 02-01-2007, 09:37 AM   #19
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The loose line work is great, everything just flows together. One nit-pick is that both hands and arms are hidden.
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Old 02-03-2007, 03:07 PM   #20
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A quick colour job:

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