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Old 07-22-2009, 04:30 PM   #1
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Welcome to my first sketchbook, I'm going to randomly post sketches i draw, as i draw them, once i get an editor tool ill begin to experiment with that. Thanks a lot. comments appreciated, don't be afraid to be critical. hahaha =D

~ Le Gun Girl ~

~ Some pimp broad about to go hunt some gangsta thugz ~
~wasnt really sure about the whole girl in a ski mask thing but, its alright rofl, also my first try with a gun~

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~colored~

~my first time coloring and editing on the computer enjoy~

~TrAsH~

~the right hand punishment, the left udder destruction. Whats not to love~
~i know the right hand is fail, i need to practice some serious hands~

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Old 07-22-2009, 10:18 PM   #2
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Default Photos Round 2 DIng ding ding~

~Drawings~

~air blowing my tear drops away~

~unfortunately there's no tears ~
~kinda liked this one its a nice face with flowing hair i drew out of my head; not to mention I'd hit that~

~Bendy Straw WTF~

~Bendy straw the ultimate weopen of destruction... its like a combo between a pole and a squirtle to make a polirtle thats right~
~ this one started out good until i tried colored pencil for the first time in a while...FAIL but the penguinz bomb shizacular and u got to love the polirtle foshoz meh hoes~

~some bad ass~

~This one actually came out well, the one eyed wrapped ownage slayer from my own fantasy chronicles~
~wish i had added more to give his badassness some company~

~Back View~

~Valient effort for the great ravage martial artist, somethings missing i believe~

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Old 07-22-2009, 10:32 PM   #3
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This group is mostly practice with a few fun lil additions to make it family oriented

~Feet up~

~I drew this one starting with the feet i actually liked where it was going until the sketchbook stopped, dumb thing god~

~Random Practicez~

~yeah not much to say the alien on the bottom was made from a fail arm~

~Hand training~

~woot practice!~
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Old 07-22-2009, 10:40 PM   #4
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Hi.

Looking at what you've posted, you've got potential, but I'd suggest that you stop drawing anime and other exaggerations and begin to mainly focus on realism, work out body proportions and what not. Learning how the body is proportioned is probably the best way to improve for you at the moment.

If you want specific crits, then the piece I'd like to focus on is the bendy straw one. The first thing that jumps at me is that his arms are like twigs, not much good for any kind of fighting, if that bendy straw is supposed to be a weapon. His hands are also way too small as well. His torso is too squished, and well, I can't say anything about the legs because they're cut off before the knee.

Draw from some references (not anime, real people) and maybe see about getting an anatomy book. The one that's done me the most good has been Anatomy for the Artist I got mine from Barnes and Noble for $20.

Good luck, hope to see more from ya.
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Old 07-22-2009, 10:43 PM   #5
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Default ~Contemplation~

~Contemplation~


~Randomness 1~

~haha batman and random stuff was trying some things out~

~zombie/skeleton~

~wow, suggestions for skeleton amplification, in the near future i want to draw death zombies treating villagers like subtle fod.~

~EPICNESS~

~The grandpa on the top right is my fav~
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Old 07-22-2009, 10:52 PM   #6
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Wow the last picture the guy on the left looks like he's taking a shit...

Anyway some good suggestions would be practice general anatomy and get a scanner
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Old 07-22-2009, 10:54 PM   #7
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thanks for the input hebi, i am actually doing a lot of that kind of stuff right now. I was trying to get to your site to see your work but its down! If you get it up and running i would really like to check out your work, thanks again man.~

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Old 07-22-2009, 11:11 PM   #8
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Old drawing, I loved it at the time though =D

~Ye old Maiden at the ball~

~wow i wonder if the crinkled paper gives away how old it is, anyways fail~
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Old 07-23-2009, 12:54 AM   #9
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Hmm i hate how you post these all as thumbnails, it annoys me to no end. Anyways, i looked them them all anyway, and i like you cartoony style, the shape that you use for all your heads is very desitinctivley you, and i like it
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Old 07-24-2009, 02:40 PM   #10
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~Hands.....~

~hand cloth?~

~meh............. if i photo shop it a bit it will look dope~

~more hand practice~

~still working on it~
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Old 07-24-2009, 05:28 PM   #11
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~Did a little anatomy practice today~

~=D~

~ha ha i am working on my anatomy~
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Heres a girl i was trying to pose as running.......... i know its a bit distorted let me know if you see any areas i can correct~=D
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People tend to tilt forward when they run, you see, when you run, you actually fall and catch yourself many times. the leg on the left should be foreshortened some more, so that it looks like it's farther back. Her hands are tiny and overall, it seems like her entire body is out of proportion, she looks about 5 heads tall when she should be around 7-8. Try finding a ref, like this it's not a very good example of the falling thing, but that's only noticeable when running at high speeds.
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Old 07-25-2009, 03:52 AM   #14
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Thanks man, extremely good advice. I really appreciate your help. Been having alot of issues with drawing female bodies for some reason. =D
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Old 07-25-2009, 10:22 PM   #15
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~think shes a bit muscly working on my anatomy still =P~

~WOOT BOOBS lol~



~although it was mostly the camera that was making the proportions really horrible i attempted to fix, decided to take hebis advice and kinda failed but that's ok to, because i am practicing =D~
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Old 07-26-2009, 01:40 AM   #16
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a bit? It's impossible for her boobs to be that big and for her to be that muscular, unless she has implants. Some general nitpicks:
Her waist is too thin, or her shouldres are too wide.... I think it's her shoulders.
Hands are tiny, neck is thick, arms are too thick as well. I'm not sure, and I'd ask someone else about this to be sure, but I think her torso needs to be longer by about one head.

keep at the studies and practice, it may feel slow, but it'll pay off. Unlearning anime is one of the hardest things to do, but it pays off and makes all your stylized drawings a whole shit ton better.
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Old 07-26-2009, 01:59 AM   #17
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~attempt at side view~

~first time trying the full side view been having some trouble staying on my sketch pad need to draw smaller =P~
~was trying to get the proportions right but i got lazy...... and my tention span busted meaning not only a poorly drawn arm and hands but in addition a horrible drawn sword.......... ;-D
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Old 07-26-2009, 10:54 PM   #18
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~ another side view with a different head~

~camera distorts it a bit but thats cool 2 =z~
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Old 07-26-2009, 11:10 PM   #19
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Proportions are waaay off, my friend. Your two most recent drawings both have hate too long of arms and both seem very stiff. Laziness is perhaps your worst enemy right now, you need to observe every detail of the human body, make drawing proper proportions like 2nd nature and practice a wide variety of angles, also, check your PMs.
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i have to agree about the last two drawings though i must say i think your last drawing is the best i like the guys face:]but u def need work on anatomy ...but who dosent lol..
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