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Old 05-12-2006, 12:11 AM   #1
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Color Art Finally finished...my new wallpaper

I started this a long time ago...posted and updated a few times in the WIP section. But I don't think you guys will remember. Anyway, to all those who helped me with this: thank you very much.

I know, the background is crappy, it really shows that I am no good at designs doesn't it? haha
C&C are still welcome though, I still have the PSD files and stuff, so it is possible for me to fix things that look wrong.

Anyway, here it is:
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Old 05-12-2006, 05:14 AM   #2
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Holy cow! How long did the take you?! I dont think i can crit about anything in it. Can I get permision to get a copy of that onto my comp?
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Old 05-12-2006, 09:39 AM   #3
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The orange colour of the girls hair tend to thow her out of the image ( in a bad way ) she deosn't feel a part of the image. If you would change it to a darker colour - perhaps simliar to the dark red of the BG. Reason being - the background is all "grimey" and rough, where here clothing and hair is bright and clean ( torn, sure - but freshly washed? ).
just my opinion
Absolutely love how you wrote the "Unwanted Children" if it was just a font, then dang.
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Old 05-12-2006, 09:55 AM   #4
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I actually like the colors. Something about the boots bugs me. Theyre far too dark being hit by direct light. Punch up the highlights a little on the boots...:B

Great job so far.
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Old 05-12-2006, 10:21 AM   #5
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i love this pic its awesome and the chick is hot lol
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Old 05-12-2006, 10:30 AM   #6
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very good coloring but I do agree with miss wiggle touch up on the light.
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Old 05-12-2006, 07:52 PM   #7
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I remember this sexy pic on pencils. Wow, you really have improved in coloring! awesome job on the details ! And yep, that font roxx.
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Old 05-13-2006, 02:20 AM   #8
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I remember this too, haha. Was very promising back then, and you've delivered that promise with full force.

Great integration of the character into a designish background, and of course, kudos on the CG. Aside from the aforementioned critique on toning up the shiny factor on her boots, there aren't many issues to address at all.
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Old 05-14-2006, 09:33 AM   #9
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Thanks again everyone! I'll see what I can do to fix the boots and other stuff.
But yeah, I didn't draw the words, its just a font...I wish I am that creative though.
And Vash: sure, go ahead and take it. If you want a full size version, you can go to my DA site: http://slackdreamer.deviantart.com
I lost track of the number of hours I put into this thing...it took way too long. But most of the hours I wasted on putting in little details that no one can see anyway...for example, the words underneath the coat of arms, and the seams on the jeans. Oh well, it was fun doing it though
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very cool, i like ita lot
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Old 05-16-2006, 03:47 AM   #11
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Hey thanks Ahulane! I look forward to seeing the touched up version (though i personaly have no problem with it as is :p)
I can see the hours of work you put into this, well done. I find it difficult to stay on one subject for more than a few weeks! lol!
Anyway, great job. Will have to look at some of your other work and will keep a keen eye out for your next works.
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Old 05-17-2006, 06:27 PM   #12
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very cool, ive started working on some myself.
alas, none are this beast! good job!
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Old 05-17-2006, 06:49 PM   #13
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this is bizarre, I once did a character that looks exactly like this one in seventh grade in the exact same pose...


anyways, nice cg. I think the character isn't getting its full spotlight in that placement and size though.
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Old 05-17-2006, 08:32 PM   #15
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the shadow around the boots needs real improvment
besides that, it looks great; i love the jeans
keep it up
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Old 05-17-2006, 10:15 PM   #16
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Oh wow. Great job on the cg, she rocks all over, especially the jeans. My gut says she's a little off balanced, or at least awkward, when I look at her right foot, but maybe that's just the Indian food acting up. Awesome all over. *click* *save* Post a bigger version of her!
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Old 05-18-2006, 11:05 AM   #17
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sexy sexy stuff bro.you shud tell us how long it took an how did you do it you know tutorial style,i really need help in creating that denim texture plzz help me
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Old 05-18-2006, 01:09 PM   #18
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who wouldnt want a girl like that? i wouldnt mind taking her home!
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