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Old 05-27-2006, 02:35 AM   #1
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Upon request im posting this more so on the behalf of sludger here...I just did the lineart which you can view over in my personal sketchbook. The beautiful color rendering is of course all his...hope you guys like

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Old 05-27-2006, 02:39 AM   #2
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There we go. Damn. I can't really...crit this T_T


Well, maybe the horns in the back are a little off center, the big ones.
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Old 05-27-2006, 03:09 AM   #3
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This is fantastic.
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Old 05-27-2006, 04:18 AM   #4
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Nice job.
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Old 05-27-2006, 04:38 AM   #5
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Sludger is really good with those red tones.
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Old 05-27-2006, 05:28 AM   #6
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Beautiful...just beautiful.

*applauds*
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Old 05-27-2006, 07:00 AM   #7
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I would not want to meet this guy down an alley on a dark night ....

Awesome job, guys.
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Old 05-27-2006, 10:19 AM   #8
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I really like that color overflow around the char. The background color spilling over the edges of him.
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Old 05-27-2006, 11:00 AM   #9
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I just want to eat it up O_O


the elbow bothers me though...
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Old 05-27-2006, 12:23 PM   #10
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B E A UTIFUL, good job both of you.
While I dont like WH40K game, it has good art potential, youz proved my thoughts right.
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Old 05-27-2006, 01:50 PM   #11
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Looks excellent, especially the texturing. I think the gun kind of blends in a little too much into his torso, though. Perhaps some more highlighting on it could help?
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Old 05-27-2006, 02:30 PM   #12
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Thanks everyone, I appreciate it :]

Moxie: What dont you like?

Wiggle: I was trying to work with it but thinkgs get looking too shiny, but im not gonna mess with it anymore, maybe another day. Thanks for the comments though!

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Old 05-27-2006, 02:46 PM   #13
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Intense pwnage here. O_o
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Old 05-27-2006, 02:58 PM   #14
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Wow...if you guys aint already teamed up in the partner thread go do it right away O_o
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Old 05-27-2006, 03:05 PM   #15
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i think my monitor may be too dark, but right now everything seems to melt together kinda, except for his legs, but especially the gun.
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Old 05-27-2006, 03:23 PM   #16
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Well the color and contrast does kinda go together. But in all honesty it matches the warhammer vibe they have in terms of color and style used. The gun is of course going to blend in slightly whether you want it to or not because the material in the armor/gun are going to be similar to an extent.
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Old 05-28-2006, 04:48 AM   #17
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Yeah, I think it's just your moniter? Hmm, as kaen said, some things are harder to bring out and not pushing blame away, but I didnt do this with the intentions of nailing it, more for fun. Otherwise I would fix some things.
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Old 05-28-2006, 06:11 AM   #18
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awesome work kean and sludger.jus sweet as hell
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Old 05-28-2006, 07:00 AM   #19
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Wow, you guys rocked this one. It's solid, nothing I really want to poke at. Great job both of you.
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Old 05-28-2006, 07:39 AM   #20
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That's pretty damned cool.
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