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Old 12-07-2004, 02:42 PM   #1
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heres my sketches... some are new and some are not, some are serious and some are well... not. anyway im 13 and i want to learn lots so crit me hard.

first of the egyptian barbarian WIP, this one is pretty recent, now that i look at it on the computer his egyptian kilt thingy looks tilted, ill fix that, and his bicep outlines are way huge . the last thing that i noticed before i even looked at it on the comp was that the thing on his kilt thingy looks like a tie, for a buisnessman suit, any ideas? edit: i used vigilante8's style of abs and pectoral muscles because i was inspired by his pic of himself as a dbz char... not that i like dbz.


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this one is called "The Eye" a little thing i did with my circle template, a cool foreshortening exercise (sort of)

---The EYE---

here is a mecha robot a started, was gonna make him a communist war machine, but it kinda got away from me

COMMUNIST WAR MACHINE

this is a silly drawing of what i like to call "The Phantom of the Ballerina"

Phantom of the Ballerina

another silly drawing of a character inspired by Malingo of "Abarat"

Malingo from "Abarat" by clive barker

a third silly drawing, as you can see its a monster who has obviously lost his marbles

No Marbles Monster

a fourth silly drawing of a undetailed, almost a silloughette of a guy with a mowhawk

Mowhawk Dude


like i said crit me hard for i am only 13 and wish to learn
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Old 12-07-2004, 10:25 PM   #2
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most of these are a little too unfinished for comments, but the ones that do seem slightly more complete could use slightly cleaner lines.

I think the best thing for you to do right now is to get a bunch of photographs and use them as reference to learn some of the basics like proportion and anatomy.
Probably the hardest thing about drawing when you are 13 isn't lack of skill, it's lack of patience. Try planning a slightly larger drawing and work on it a little each day.

one more time, use reference!
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Old 12-08-2004, 09:41 AM   #3
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Yeah, what Andrew said... Plan first, then practice and practice.. and practice more. You've got a good imagination though, so don't lose that...
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Old 12-08-2004, 10:42 AM   #4
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you guys are right, ill sit there and work on something for like an hour, and get completely sick of it, and put it away for a month, until i get a new idea for it, thats what i did for the egyptian one, it was originaly going to be a humanoid (metal abs and stuff) but i got sick of it and put it away.
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Old 07-17-2006, 07:30 PM   #5
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nice. co much better than when i was 13
 
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Cleaner lines could be practiced. :3

You can still go over a line in a drawing again and again, but it has to look smooth, and you have to try to stay on that line. :nod nod:
 
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Don't bump up old threads, TruWarrior.
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