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Old 05-02-2011, 05:44 PM   #1
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Black and White Naruto Character Fan pics

Hand drawn by mehhh!!! ^-^ Choji is my all time favorite so, yeah! I hope ya like!! ^-^~
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Old 05-03-2011, 08:26 PM   #2
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Was this drawn with a mouse? If not the lines are very shaky.
I'm no expert on naruto (I read the manga however) but I do believe that choujis face is much rounder than this.
The swirls are incosistent.
That chip basically blends in with his skin.
His fingers can use some help to. You drew his fingers basically bending outward which is highly impossible.
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Old 05-04-2011, 10:32 AM   #3
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The hand is really tiny. Generally, the hand's length from the tip of the middle finger to the palm is about the same as the length from the chin to the forehead.

The ears are also rather small. They will usually reach from the eyebrows to about the bottom of the nose.
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Old 05-04-2011, 05:11 PM   #4
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Thanks for critique! been waiting for like two days... sighhhh... lol thanx! You are both veeeeeery smart obviously! ^-^ If I had known that, I totally would have done exactly that! ^-^ Also, I don't believe Choji's face is all that round, he has a very defined chin as I remember. Also, yes, I did in fact use a mouse for this drawing. I usually use a mouse, but I also have a tablet, kinda hard to get used to. lol. Thanx again! Byee!
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